Canals of New Mars: Interlude by flavia49
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"How is the little girl?" J.S. asked as soon as he landed. The others shrugged and said nothing. Exploiting the He-bot's strenght, they prepared the med-lab. They laid Jetsan on it and left the He-bot acting as a nurse.
When everything was OK, J.S. realized that he was both weary to the bone and starving. Thus followed the old rule that you should eat, sleep and empty your bowels when you gets the chance. You never knows when you can do it again. J.S. decided to rest for a while. "There's a room with your stuff in." Eve told him. "OK," he said "I'm going to take a nap, but if something smells fishy, wake me up. Oh! Either Earthener or Rogue."
"What do have the Rogues to do with you?" Eve asked.
"Ehm, we couldn't agree about who owned the med-lab." J.S. answered.
Eve sighed: "Your people weren't enough, even the Rogues want your skin now!".
"Didn't you save it for this!" he laughted.
After spending some days within the med-lab, Jetsam started to recover slowly. In the meantime J.S. assessed his situation. #1 He should discover what really was the cavern-hangar. #2 He should understand why the Rogue wanted the med-lab. #3 He should understand why Eve had saved his life.
The exploration of the cavern resulted frustratingly useless. In fact the only places he could go were the gangway, the little rooms and the large porthole leading to the platform, where he had parked the astrocargo. Beyond that, the smooth metal walls were like steep, vertical cliffs disappearing in the pitch-black darkness. He had dropped a can and he hadn't heard the thump. The calcareous sediment was crumbly and didn't offer any grip for a climb. Annoyed, he put off the "cavern"-problem until better times. The med-lab was occupied by Jetsam, thus also the Rogue problem had to be posponed.
But he could face Eve. It was obvious that she and the others had risked a lot to keep him in good health. He didn't complain, of course. Why they didn't give him any hint even if they were his friends? He exercised all his remarkable charm with Eve, who appeared to be the leader. She always got annoyingly vague when he started asking questions on the cavern or the reasons for their help.
Even Adam, a jolly guy, became evasive about these two issues.
While Eve appeared a nut harder to crack than the average, J.S. realized she was softening.
One day they were having a chat, leaning on the wall open on the black abyss. J.S. thought: "Who dares, wins!" and tried the direct approach. "Why did you save my life? You can tell me it now."
She looked unconfortable and summoning a faint smile she replied "Just for fun, you know it". and turned to go away.
"No, it wasn't." he argued."You want something from me. If you tell me it, I can see what I can do" and to stress the meaning he tried to stop her grasping her hand.
Eve panicked, freed her hand, slapped him on his face and run away in sequence.
"One more dead end" J.S. mused gloomily while Adam shook his head knowingly, leaning against the doorframe.
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DAZ: Victoria 4.2;
DAZ: Michael 4;
Neftis: Daryl Hair;
ExprssnImg: Hebot;;
Anton Kisiel: Apollo Maximus;
Capsces: Cole;
Traveler: Shades of Maquah;
DNA_Affectation: Loin Cloth;
Bobby25: WitchHunter V4;
kalebdaark: Cryogenic Chamber;
tonyo1701: Sickbay Recovery Bed;
Fringewood: The Balcony r2.
Comments (39)
theprojectionist
Your ScFi scenes Rock my dear Bravo
jocko500
this is super done
Thetis
I hope she will recover
Minda
excellent composition and superb work!!
beatoangelico
marveolus scene and fantastic work..Bravissima..!!!
lyron
Excellent work!!
dbrv6
Great scene and nice conversation dynamics. The bot was a bit confusing as to what he was doing till I read the narrative. Tricky situation to communicate visualy.
killerkane
outstanding work. kinda reminds me of blade runner in some ways -jeff
anahata.c
After so much action, you now introduce another moment of repose, where your character (JS)---and we---get the chance to mull, once more, to look back at what's happened and why. For JS, it's in the question, 'why did they do this for me'...a nice change-of-pace repose, after all the action and risk of the previous entries... And you keep your reader attentive with Eve's still evasive response (and slapping JS's face). And Adam not revealing anything either. Good piece of story line and advancement, with a few twists & turns to keep it all engaging. Your image feels like it's on the deck of a big ship, only this isn't the ocean. And your detail is again finely thought out and creative. The greenish-blue light is true to the interior of this scene. And there appears to be a diagonal of light encasing Adam, as if he is set apart by an aura. Your scene between JS and Eve is very nicely punctuated by the view into Jetsam and the He-bot. And the encounter between JS and Eve has much love-tension in it; because while the narrative has her storming away, your image shows her slightly longing for him, as he for her. It's subtle, but it's there, I think. And they are connecting but 'not' connecting: You got that all in your poses. Again Flavia, not knowing 3D, I don't know how hard it is to get these complex poses, but they are awfully complex, the types of poses that would take a photographer quite some time to set up. Kudos on that once more, you use the software quite dramatically; and if it's a laborious process, kudos for your work as well as thought. And very nice greenish/cloistered light on both of them. Another fine job, Flavia. So you know I don't take your work lightly, I've been here since 5 in the morning (my time) and it's now about 10 minutes to 7. So it's been almost 2 hours. I want to do a photo or two (of yours), so I'll stop for now. I promise to try to get here more often, but I see that the last time was in mid April of this year, which is at least only 2 months ago. (Some people I get to much less often.) (My long comments make it really hard for me to do tons. It's just how I am. It takes me forever, unfortunately.) In any case, it's a delight to be back in this narrative! Let me go to a photo or two, before I end for this morning...but a huge fav for everything I've commented on today.