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Well, I've decided to put some of my writing on here (on auntietk's suggestion) in lieu of more pictures. I'll put some more photos up soon, though. This is a poem I wrote, I think it was 11th or 12th grade, I can't quite recall. THe funny thing is, I wrote it in about 5-10 minutes in the middle of a particularly boring language arts lecture, just to satisfy the requirements for my writing portfolio that year (now I think of it, it was probably 12th grade) It's kind of a riddle, in a sense. See if you can figure out what the poem is about by the end of it. I just made the image in paint in about 2 minutes, just so there would be something there; it was bothering me.
Music in the Night
A brilliant explosion of Cyan ran itself down the black ocean
even as the pale Crimson-hued rider hurled itself at its brother.
A blast of Silver pelted the kaleidoscope with reserved violence,
and the deafening tones blinded its edges with
unrestrained beauty
And reflecting the whirlpool of screaming color above,
a pane of glass, unpredictable as water and mysterious as life,
revealing itself to the Night, mirroring its father
mimicking its heavenly companion
reverberating the resplendent ringing of color
And on the edge of this world of light and sound and beauty,
imbued with such fantastic being, a queer sight,
a contrast so inexplicably amazing,
with articulate monotony
the Blade of the Night cultivates a perfect compromise
between the Origin, and the Provocation
The flaming Night grasps its offspring,
They extol each other in tumultuous color
It is a sound,
Magnificent...
Overpowering...
Glorious...
The Melody and
the Harmony,
The Origin
and the Provocation,
Singing to each other's ecstatic music.
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Have you guessed yet? Probably not. Unless, of course, you already read the tags I wrote for this poem...Cheater. It's a poem about the Northern Lights, reflecting off of the ice below it.
Comments (4)
auntietk
Wowwwwww! This is really well done. I had shivers reading it! I didn't know it was about the Northern Lights until you said so, and of course I went back and read it again. Spectacular!!! (I am totally impressed that you wrote this while you were in high school, btw.) Thank you for posting this - I'll look forward to seeing more from you!
beachzz
This is amazing--blast of color, light, sound--beautifully written!!
summer1412
By the Gods, Caleb...you have the most spectacular way with words...I miss your writing, this is nothing short of brilliant. Consider yourself favourited, amigo! And I know what Auntie means, I got chills as well... Gorgeous as always.
Rainastorm
I am so glad you did...I dont have the confidence to post any of my poems or lyrics...so I will enjoy reading yours wonderful work