Avenging Angel Segment Non_tooned Page7 by estherau
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Hi - after these next few pages I will start posting the tooned style for comparison, so you can tell me which suits a comic best.
I find this current way of doing it a lot less work.
Love esther
Comments (4)
panko
Posing on first box is a little awkward. Also the scenery looks rather empty. Maybe a different viewing angle (ie from above) might correct this. Second box is perfect.
Fidelity2
Very well done by you. 5+.
shadownet
IMO - I also agree with panko. Hardest thing for most artist to do is learn to crop their work. I am perhaps worlds worst at times but am trying to get better. In first scene you should crop or frame so most of scene setting (table) to left of bag is cut out so focus is on Angie in foreground with guard in back. Same is true of second though to lesser degree, and you should crop behind Angie about halfway what you have so she is less centered in scene and more prominent focus.
estherau
but if I did do that cropping in the first pic how would I fit in all the writing?