Avenging Angel Segment Non_tooned Page6 by estherau
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Description
All critical comments welcome.
I will post a (different) tooned excerpt soon for comparison of possible styles. Doing it this way is easier and less processor intensive and also improves cross compatibility with other 3d softwares such as vue (for outdoor scenes) compared with toon style/cel shaded art.
love esther
PS Almost forgot to say - the pose and very nice colt 45 are from one of Panko's sets (can't remember which one) and I used one of his poses as a base too.
Comments (4)
M2A
Fun sequence.
thecytron
Nice work!
Fidelity2
I love it. 5+.
shadownet
Your renders are very nice and I can see why you want to show more details so the larger panels are good for that but you need more than two for the page or the storyline seems choppy - at least to me. Just as a story has a start and builds to a finish, each chapter or installment if I can use one of those term for the page sequences needs to have a sense of flow, the more images the stronger the sense of flow, but just as you can have too many you can have too few in a sequence. You also probably want to vary the flow according to the storyline this way the construction of the visual display becomes part of the medium used to tell the story.