Words In The Wind by beachzz
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Words In The Wind
Words in the wind
I catch a few
And they tell
Me a story
A noun here
To give it strength
A verb to make it move
An adjective
To bring it alive
When they all
Join together
And everything
Works just right
A tale is born
A poem is written
For me to read
Or to write
Words In the wind
Let me catch
Just a few
To share
With you
7/18/09
Comments (14)
durleybeachbum
So THAT'S how you do it!! LOL!
Meisiekind
LOL @ Andrea!!! Just pure bliss Marilyn!!! I can see that this also just came so easy to you!! Fantastic writing!!! :))
bmac62
Great catch. Your illustration shows the Trade Winds wafting a few more words your way:) Your technique is a faithful producer. I know I've said this before but you get so much said with so few words! This makes what you say quick and easy to read and most memorable for me.
3x3
lovely written x
photostar
Now if only diagramming a sentence would have been taught that way in high school, there would have been no problem understanding it...LOL Short, sweet and to the point poem, Marilyn.
PD154
How many roads must a man walk down Before you call him a man? Yes, 'n' how many seas must a white dove sail Before she sleeps in the sand? Yes, 'n' how many times must the cannon balls fly Before they're forever banned? The answer, my friend, is blowin' in the wind, The answer is blowin' in the wind.
auntietk
Perfect image for your wind-caught words. Sometimes it's just like that, isn't it?
chasfh
Pretty image and words... Been catching a few of those myself just lately ;-)
goodoleboy
And, after all is said and done, they call the wind, Mariah. Good prose and stellar image, Missy Maz!
thevolunteer
Another wonderful poem for a wonderful photo. I must start writing my poems again too. Aloha
hipps13
sweet work smiles warm hugs, Linda
vaggabondd
very beautiful work my friend :)
anaber
wonderful image and perfect words..fits well:)
anahata.c
I love how some commenters gave you songs. Well I can't think of a song for the life of me, but I understand how the words fly down to us and coagulate into a piece. And I also understand that just a few words can spark off a whole piece—they're messengers that get us moving again. Very nice & truthful evocation; and the image is beautiful too. I may have told you this, but an old poet teacher used to say "is there a poem in this room?" We learned to find poems flying by in the breeze...you write about that here...