In That Moment by vaggabondd

Writers • Surrealism • posted on Aug 02, 2009

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Now that time is upon me That dreaded moment When all is silent When the wind stops blowing The birds stop singing And my friends are no where to be found Where the heat Is boiling me from the inside And I am afraid More afraid than I have ever been That place Where my throat is dry My heart stops beating And I just know This is the end But its not Somehow Even though there is no light At the end of the tunnel I find my way back out The world is not better I have gained nothing from this But hardship In the face of mine enemy I stand with my shoulders back And scream from the mountain top You did not win The more I read this the more I like this one. Somedays I want to stand on that mountain top and scream. I hope you like it to. Randy

Comments (13)

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beachzz

10:38AM | Sun, 02 August 2009

Oh yeah, don't we all have that feeling---thanks for putting it into words!!

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Rainastorm

10:39AM | Sun, 02 August 2009

I could use a good mountain top scream myself today Randy....awesome words here...

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flaviok

10:42AM | Sun, 02 August 2009

Profundo e sábio, poema excelente meu amigo, aplausos (5)

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DarkStormCrow

11:27AM | Sun, 02 August 2009

Very nice work, well done..

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auntietk

12:08PM | Sun, 02 August 2009

So much goes through my mind, reading this, I hardly know what to say. But it's all about content, so what that really means is that you wrote a great poem that engaged me in the story. Nicely written!

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