The Closer you get.. a different Perspective by tennesseecowgirl

Photography • Architecture • posted on Aug 03, 2009

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I was left a comment I wasn't sure on so I wrote and asked about it and they gave me their advice, what they thought might improve my photo, here is part of what he wrote back to me I was just talking about the coloring. I liked the coloring approach in that image. However, by coloring only a corner, my eyes were directed there instead of the barn. I think that by adding additional color touches around the image, the observation experience will improve... so Osvaldo this is for you, with my thanks. I hope this version is a bit better, see it does pay to give constructive criticism, and not just leave rude remarks. And in reference to my comment yesterday to receiving a yawn to my work, please know I am all for anyone suggesting a way to improve my work, and I have left plenty of suggestions on others work, so feel free to to suggest, critique, advise, offer techniques. I can take it. lol Osvaldo's gallery Here is a comment I loved.... it gave me a smile, You are the barn paparazzi!!! GREAT stuff Lynell!!! David yes David I guess I am guilty of that LOL Previous Barn

The Closer you Get Thank you all for supporting me you all rock... hugss

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Comments (57)

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DAVER2112

1:02PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Very nice image! Good composition. :)

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Miska7

1:07PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Very nice scene. I like this version better! Well done.

jared99

1:08PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Hmmm. I think I have to agree -- it is improved this way. Kudos to both you and Osvaldo!

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guitar-slinger

1:10PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Cool camera angle !! great Image [^____^] Cheers, Roger

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sossy

1:13PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

cool view onto the building! impressive grey and woodwork! ;o)

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THROBBE

1:17PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Nice selective coloring! I would not change a thing!

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orig_buggy

1:18PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

I think its great!!

november22

1:26PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

I agree about the coloring comment - prefer this one; the blue and bit of rest/red balance each other, and better both set of the silver gray of the wood.

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DarkStormCrow

1:27PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Excellent texture and perspective photo, very well presented, well done...

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BessieB

1:34PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

I really love these barn shots and postwork, very good indeed.

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pops

1:41PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

I do like this a little better. It is way more fun to leave rude remarksthan to have to think of something clever to say....lol

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bimm3d

1:44PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

nice!!!

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MOSKETON

1:47PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

?? YO VEO LA MISMA, PERO IGUALMENTE ME GUSTA. FELICIDADES.

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KarmaSong

1:57PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

THis barn looks colossal! Excellent capture and presentation!

PD154

2:03PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

As a photographer the first one was ok, I thought you did well?...Oh well, I am with Ray, don't change things you and many other (Phootographers) seem happy with?

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durleybeachbum

2:09PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

It's a superb composition!!!

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farmerC

2:09PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Fantastic work.

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drag

2:11PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Oh yawn...just kidding lol..I like this one the colors do take your eyes around the photograph. Plus I just love old barns..

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Dreamingbee

2:11PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

wonderful shot .. and we all a little bit paparazzi , or ?? ;))))))

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hipps13

2:28PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

wonderful are both warm hugs, Linda

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lizzibell

2:37PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

great view...

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MtnMist

3:00PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

I like all three versions. Each is unique in its colorization and personality. I love your photos. :)

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morganahope

3:09PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

LIKE A OLD FARM !!! I LOVE IT !!

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lior

3:27PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

This one seems to be better!

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cvrad

3:36PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

it does make a marked imprrovement to the whole composition I would not have thought of using a colored frame to give a picture more color and balance execllent suggestion Osvaldo.

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magichild2

3:47PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

I looked at the previous and this one...I see what you were trying to do. I see nothing wrong with them...it's fun to experiment with filters..

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flavia49

4:07PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

great work!!!

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awjay

4:37PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

super shot

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Faemike55

5:20PM | Mon, 03 August 2009

Great work on both images. however, as it was pointed to me, do it for yourself and not others. as for me suggesting how you can improve your photos, would be like me telling RGUS or Gizmee how to do nudes - ain't gonna happen cause I can't match that quality, like your photos have.

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