Haiku Tears by auntietk

Writers • Romance • posted on Aug 06, 2009

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Haiku Tears Oh so sad today Remembering the good times Miss you far too much Nice to think about But they are gone forever Those glorious days Never coming back Broke my heart to say goodbye The end so final So much easier If I didn't love you still Trying to move on It's just that today I could feel your tender touch Part of you remains .......... Going through some (very) old files, I realized I'd never posted this one. It was an exercise in continuous Haiku, and I remember the most difficult thing was finding a place to STOP! .......... Title page created in ArtRage and Photoshop Font is Isadora Caps

Comments (23)

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MagikUnicorn

8:24PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

Wonderful Poem Good Night

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clbsmiley

8:40PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

Wow! excellent!

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cmolsen2002

8:42PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

Super. Was this prompted by a loss?

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lizzibell

9:19PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

nice work...

PD154

9:21PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

Tender Tara, heartfelt words, one never knows what to say in these situations, except know there are real friends here, I have never been a bear of a guy, quite the opporsite, but those shoulders have been cried on many times.

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Faemike55

9:25PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

You would have won the contest in Shogun! Great work!

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npauling

9:28PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

This is so beautiful and moving.

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beachzz

10:01PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

Poignant words, more familiar than I care to think about at times. I love the Haiku form; it tells a story in such a short, intense way.

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bmac62

11:59PM | Thu, 06 August 2009

Lost loves are still warm memories to cherish. Beautifully expressed here. Have never tried the Haiku form...appears challenging but worthwhile things don't come easy.

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helanker

1:52AM | Fri, 07 August 2009

But we are lucky, us who still have the Sweet memories in our mind. Beautiful poem Taea.

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ZanderXL

2:20AM | Fri, 07 August 2009

I can empathise with these words.

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Meisiekind

2:45AM | Fri, 07 August 2009

Mmmmmmm - way too close for comfort for me today.... You have struck a tender sinew in my soul with this Tara... But you know that.. don't you?? Stywe druk en baie soene! x0x0x0x

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durleybeachbum

2:57AM | Fri, 07 August 2009

Continous haiku...mmm, as Bill says, quite a challenge. I have made single ones. Thhis is very good.

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flavia49

9:37AM | Fri, 07 August 2009

great!

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hipps13

11:20AM | Fri, 07 August 2009

beautiful work, Tara May can remember the smiles too warm hugs and love, Linda Kaye

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chasfh

12:10PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

Beautiful... Haiku unfortunately is beyond my abilities as a writer:-) Very touching...

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orig_buggy

4:22PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

terrific work!!

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anaber

8:02PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

I love the poem.it really touches!

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Merrylee

11:32AM | Sat, 08 August 2009

very touching...but very nice Tara

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Katraz

3:00AM | Sun, 09 August 2009

Very touching.

lucindawind

5:57PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

awww such sad words beautifully written

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anahata.c

5:54AM | Thu, 13 August 2009

yep, hard to stop (lol), but the flow is strong & your images & rhythms are strong too. It's so strange to see a lament from you: Even when you write of devastating events, you have resolve & light in your words. This is an unrequited vision, and it's almost fun to see it coming from you!

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