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When You Smile

Writers Romance posted on Aug 07, 2009
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I have loved you forever From your first breath Until my last breath You touch places in my heart That no one else even knows exist Your beauty is more Than the way you look Your beauty is in the way You make me feel about myself When I am with you I am all man And you are all woman The way you melt in my arms Makes me melt in your presence You hold your breath And I cannot breath You do not hold my hand For me to follow You hold my hand For me to lead You smile And I am weak

Comments (14)


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chasfh

12:38PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

Very touching and romantic... A lot of heartfelt sentiment in this one.

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Rainastorm

12:47PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

Beautiful Randy...love your work...makes me wish I wrote better...I could write a book right now and it would be so far from good. lol Love this! Can't wait to read your next. :-)

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miashadows

1:27PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

That's what they call true love.Very beautiful......

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DarkStormCrow

2:22PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

Excellent words and composition, well done...

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Bossie_Boots

3:41PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

Superb writing very touching hugs lou x

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Faemike55

5:41PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

Beautiful! Romantic! Loving!

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beachzz

10:41PM | Fri, 07 August 2009

You do this so well!!

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Merrylee

11:51AM | Sat, 08 August 2009

Great one Randy...you do write well

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flaviok

2:59PM | Sat, 08 August 2009

Sensual e fascinante, magnifico poema meu amigo, aplausos (5)

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hipps13

6:56PM | Sat, 08 August 2009

sweet, Randy a smile always brings one back to you warm hugs, Linda

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gypsyflame

10:47AM | Sun, 09 August 2009

So Beautiful...love the romance...

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adrie

4:48PM | Sun, 09 August 2009

Just love this beautiful Poem.

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ZanderXL

3:23AM | Mon, 10 August 2009

An intangigle and powerful emotion wonderfully put into words.

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schonee

11:53PM | Tue, 11 August 2009

I LOVE THIS ONE!


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