You Scare Me Too Death by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on Aug 10, 2009

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I have tasted The bitter end of the sword And kept fighting I have stood alone In the heat of the desert With no hope of water I have looked Face to face with the devil And did not flinch And nothing And I mean nothing Has scared me like you They all wanted to kill me But you You want to love me You are so kind and gentle You think more about me Than you do yourself I don't know how to fight you You make me weak And that scares me to death

Comments (16)

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Lisajobb

1:52PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

Is this your own work? it sent a shiver down my spine because how true it is that so many of us are terrified by someone wanting to love us... Congratulations on a really superb piece of poetry.

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flaviok

2:11PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

Poema intricico de uma grandiosidade fascinante meu amigo. Arrebenta o coração, brilhante, aplausos (5)

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Merrylee

2:15PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

That avatar of Lisajobb scares me to death...lol.....I'm not terrified by someone wanting to love me, it's home long they will love me....good one Randy.

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adrie

2:56PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

Your a master in poems my friend love them

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DarkStormCrow

7:40PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

Excellent words , well done...

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Faemike55

7:42PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

Excellent words and so true for many of us!

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auntietk

10:02PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

Having faced those perils And not afraid of love What scares me to death Is math

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brycek

10:03PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

Nice work, Randy!!

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beachzz

11:08PM | Mon, 10 August 2009

Breathtaking, Randy--you do this SO well!!

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ZanderXL

3:05AM | Tue, 11 August 2009

It may scare you to death but is one fear that it is worth giving in to.

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Rainastorm

8:10AM | Tue, 11 August 2009

I agree...it would be the most scary thing...

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hipps13

11:43AM | Tue, 11 August 2009

wonderful words, Randy makes thinking smart warm hugs, Lina

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jascorpio

6:26PM | Tue, 11 August 2009

sensational and beautiful, wow

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miashadows

5:11AM | Wed, 12 August 2009

It's not the dark in man that scares him but the light.Your poem made me think of that.This love is a mirror.I think you see yourself or you would not see the love in someone else.That's why it's so scary.Love the poem very beautiful.

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