Albert's Kitchen by CoLa3D
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Description
This is my first attempt at shading and lighting. I would like any input to make it better. Please leave feedback. Thanks.
Comments (6)
euology2000
very very nice....but the bowl on the counter seem a little out of place...maybe its to plasticy...watch the mapping on the sink..looks a little bit streched...and try dirtying up the scene a little bit...filth always makes things look more real!
CoLa3D
very good points. Thanks for your comments. I would greatly like more to better my work.
RealEyes_Artworks
GREAT JOB!! The yellow on the red bowl could use a little toning down but other than that, you're right on. Kick arse!!
Elpooperado
Looks pretty good, pretty realistic. It's a little hard for me to find where the focus is meant to be, seems like most of the scene is out of focus. Unless the bowl is the center of attention. If so, you might turn the bowl and make whatever is written on it a little more prominant. Another touch of realism is that you might make the sink a little leaky, add a drop or two coming out of the spout.
Nanilli
Just a guess... it's supposed to look plastic, it's a cat food bowl... says "Kitty" on it... Other than my guess hehe your work is stunning. They are right about the bowl feeling out of place, I don't think it's cause of the way it appears plastic.. I think it's because all of the other colors in the artwork are very plain and then you have the shocking red bowl. It draws the eye right to it. If you were going for that then good job! Hope to see mroe of your work.
CoLa3D
Thank you. The bowl does seem out of place here. Perhaps I should explain.. This is a scene from a story, in which the bowl plays a big part. This is why it is here in this shot. I really appreciate all your feedback. I need it to improve.