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Don't take me for Granted

Writers Romance posted on Aug 21, 2009
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Don't take me for granted I'm not what I seem I hide in the shadows I'm lost in a dream Don't take me for granted I'm not always around I'll write in the windows And miss what I found Once I lost my lover Tried to find another But I dove for cover She became my mother You were all I've ever had You're everything I need When things got really bad It's your blood I bleed Don't take me for granted I'm just one man You've pulled me through Without a plan Don't take me for granted I don't think you get it That what we have is true and I will never forget it

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JSGraphics

11:49PM | Fri, 21 August 2009

Outstanding work! Very Well Done! Be sure to visit my gallery!

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vaggabondd

12:09AM | Sat, 22 August 2009

This is good stuff my friend. Very nice

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beachzz

11:01AM | Sat, 22 August 2009

Nicely said!!

Wolfspirit

12:17PM | Tue, 25 August 2009

Okay I get what you're saying here, although I don't like the flow of it, something sounds off. (I just had to be different did'nt I?!) A word out of place or I don't know, but it's confusing… In addition, when you're pleading for or demanding a certain behavior from another, the last thing you want to do, is come off confusing. Aside from all that, I personally picked up something way left field from what I am assuming was your intentions. To me when I read the words "me" and "I" personally I got the impression the word "opportunity" spoke not you directly but literal opportunity, and it spoke to whoever is willing to listen in its plea – "Don't take me for granted". Although, maybe that message is just for me. Ha-ha, in that, a reminder of opportunity is everywhere, remember to look for it, don't get lost in self-absorption…. It's everywhere, it's everywhere! Lol, Thanks Chris and have a great day!

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missblue

4:27AM | Sat, 01 October 2011

Beautiful and so true =)


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