Early Calls by beachzz
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I wrote this several months ago. Things have changed, but I still like this a lot.
Early Calls
That siren call
First thing
In the morning
Rouses me
Out of a sound sleep
I know it's you
I pick up the phone
Listen as you talk
I hear it
Through the fog
Of semi consciousness
You wake me up
Quickly with your
Soft sweet sexy voice
No matter what
You might say to me
Hey babe I hear
And it melts my heart
Sometimes the talk
Is nothing special
Sometimes it's
Lots more
Touches me
In places
Way down deep
It's never enough
These short little
Times we have
Just teasers of
What I know
Then you're gone
On with your day
I lie back
And think about
What could be
I know what
It has been
How it is
Hearing your voice
Makes me want more
Comments (13)
durleybeachbum
SUPERB!
frankman
It's very personal. Sweet words.
Mondwin
Sublime......bravissima!V:DDD.Hugsxx Whylma
Alex_Antonov
Remarkable work!
PD154
I know that feeling when a certain voice does that lately I am fully conversant with these opening words, good pour out sweetie, hope you are having fun on the CA jaunt :)
THROBBE
Fantastic!
Rainastorm
Very beautiful words:-)
3x3
lovely written x
auntietk
Very well done! You've conveyed the mood so well. Beautiful work!
flavia49
very lovely!
danapommet
Very soft words but powerful too. I like it. Dana
myrrhluz
Lovely words and mood. Very well written.
anahata.c
ditto tara & others. I know the feeling in my past, and everyone else does as well. You stated it well and in your usual musical rhythms. And the image is peaceful and inviting like the poem. Nice couplet at end, a nice conclusion. A very sunny & positive work Marilyn...