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Dancin Divas

Writers People posted on Sep 10, 2009
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Dancin Divas There they were Those two Crazy Silly Slightly high Women The music was hot And so were The guys The place Was hoppin But no one danced More music A few more Drinks And things Started getting Wild The girls left And the women Ruled the place They rocked They rolled Shook the rafters Two women Not young But filled With a life And a spirit That was catching Those hot young guys Couldn't get Enough of Those wild women It was a siren song Drove them crazy Dance with me Dance with me No Dance with ME And they did They danced They danced till They couldn't stop It became dance Madness Those hot young men Were entranced The wild women Laughed Twirled Swirled Spun They ruled The lights Came up And still those Hot young men Surrounded them Wouldn't let them go Followed them Take me home Take me home No, take ME home The wild women Laughed Sang Danced Kissed Hugged Those young Men watched The women leave Gave them cards Numbers Call me Call me No, call ME Those dancing divas Those wild women Broke hearts Caused strong men To weep But they were Kind Gentle Loving Those hot young guys Never knew what hit them They talk still Of those Wild women And they remember They hope Wonder Dare they Dream???

Comments (8)


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Meisiekind

2:49AM | Thu, 10 September 2009

grin I wish I could be there... Wonderful work putting it to words Marilyn!! Bravo! :)

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durleybeachbum

6:17AM | Thu, 10 September 2009

Marvellous!!!!

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auntietk

8:13AM | Thu, 10 September 2009

This is great! Really excellent work -- it has such power!

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THROBBE

9:02AM | Thu, 10 September 2009

Very nice work!

PD154

9:07AM | Thu, 10 September 2009

Excellent maz!!!

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vaggabondd

9:33AM | Thu, 10 September 2009

My friend I just love it when you write, this is beautiful work!!!!! Now I am no longer a young hot man, well not young anymore hahaha but I know I would be one of them hawling like a wild dog at these beautiful women. Wonderful work my friend, wonderful

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anahata.c

7:10PM | Sat, 12 September 2009

a wonderful evocation, your language is as always in potent pulses & breaths, and you describe the event as an event—a sequence of invitations, dance, etc—but also as the feelings & even dares of these people & their oh-so different worlds coming together. And your image seems to be someone dancing and partially obscured not only by shadow & light but by passion. (You always choose images for your writing, well. It's something only a few writers do well, and you're definitely one.) I've always liked how you end some stanzas with single words (laughed, sang, danced, kissed, hugged), and know how to wind down a stanza with little beats, little pulses of big experiences & feelings. A fine work Marilyn. And I know what the poem means! To the divas, I say: More to you!

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3x3

2:46AM | Wed, 16 September 2009

lovely words and image x


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