Sorry My Love by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on Sep 17, 2009

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Sorry my love I know I should send you this letter But I just don’t have the courage What if you don’t love me The way I love you What if the sound of my voice Doesn’t make your heart stop What if the touch of my hand Doesn’t bring a tear to your eye What if just the smile on my face Doesn’t change your day Change your life What if you don’t love me The way I love you As always if you have ever loved someone so much that you just know they can't love you the way you love them, then this poem is for you

Comments (14)

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DevilDogStudios

7:12AM | Thu, 17 September 2009

let it out brother !!! great stuff

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Rainastorm

7:15AM | Thu, 17 September 2009

Woah...awesome words Randy...awesome!!!

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auntietk

7:32AM | Thu, 17 September 2009

You have done a masterful job of portraying fear, excitement, longing, hope, and a sense of wonder ... all with the same words. Really nice writing!

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Bossie_Boots

8:13AM | Thu, 17 September 2009

I have to agree with above put better than i ever could write superb poem my friend hugs lou x

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Faemike55

9:56AM | Thu, 17 September 2009

WOW! Fantastic feelings

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Merrylee

11:27AM | Thu, 17 September 2009

Been there...done that...and never want to be there again...such a sad poem

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miashadows

11:30AM | Thu, 17 September 2009

Very beautiful poem Randy....

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violet

1:05PM | Thu, 17 September 2009

Thanks....!!!

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adrie

4:09PM | Thu, 17 September 2009

Beautiful Poem Randy, thanks.

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wysiwig

7:06PM | Thu, 17 September 2009

And now I'm glad I didn't know The way it all would end the way it all would go Our lives are better left to chance I could have missed the pain But I'd have had to miss the dance ....Tony Arata, recorded by Garth Brooks Very moving. Just dance with the lady. If she stays, you don't have to ask.

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myrrhluz

12:25AM | Fri, 18 September 2009

I can't add to what auntietk said. Your words are poignant and beautiful. And you have tempted me to pull out books of poetry that have been undisturbed for years. Far too long, thank you.

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