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Just Dreams Now ( for vaggabondd )

Writers Romance posted on Oct 02, 2009
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I lay awake at night Dreaming about the stars But its hard to see the moon Through all the tears We used to sit on the edge Of the big dipper And share each others dreams But our dreams are just dreams now I wish I could blame it on you Or blame it on me But sometimes That’s just the way it has to be I am lucky though It only hurts so bad Because I was able To fall so deeply in love As always if you think this one is for you, well this time you are wrong sometimes they are just for me and this one is just for me. Thank you to all of my friends you are in my heart always Randy

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wysiwig

5:46PM | Fri, 02 October 2009

The pain means you can still feel and that's always a hopeful sign. Well said.

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vaggabondd

6:25PM | Fri, 02 October 2009

Hello my friends I hope you don't every worry about me hahaha. I write so many poems from the feelings I get when I listen to sad music or a tear jerker movie and sometimes they are from different parts of my life but in real life I am very seldom depressed it just seems that way haha. I hope you like my stuff. Randy

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Faemike55

6:33PM | Fri, 02 October 2009

Well written

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ryanneubig

7:08PM | Fri, 02 October 2009

www.suicidepreventionlifeline.org Just in case

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Rainastorm

7:18PM | Fri, 02 October 2009

((hugs)) Lovely words

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brycek

8:41PM | Fri, 02 October 2009

Very beautiful Randy!!

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myrrhluz

9:40PM | Fri, 02 October 2009

Ah Randy, good of you to set my mind at ease! One of my sons and I are also very prone to get soggy during emotional scenes in movies. I love watching movies with him because we can smile at each other through our tears, with no embarrassment, knowing we're both hopeless cases. I love the imagery in this piece. It beautifully expresses the feeling of boundless horizons when you have a close connection with someone. Having described that so well the reader understands and feels the great pain when it is lost. Very nice!

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Merrylee

11:37PM | Fri, 02 October 2009

How funny what your friend said...yes you are mostly up...I wish I could say that..seen you pictures at the fair and saw that your children enter some also...cool

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adrie

3:27AM | Sat, 03 October 2009

Beautiful written poem my dear friend, love it.

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miashadows

9:31AM | Sat, 03 October 2009

Well could say it was...love the title..lol...Wonderful poem Randy.

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hipps13

8:07PM | Sat, 03 October 2009

wonderful work warm hugs me friend, Linda


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