secrets by beachzz

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Oct 12, 2009

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secrets you and i know about the late night moments we share the talk the secrets so close you'd never know how far apart we really are no one else knows what we say how we sound those times so special soft dreamy more real sometimes than real our secret life hidden from the world nighttime dark outside light in our hearts and minds and souls only for us a few words whispered spoken so quietly sometimes i wonder if you are really there then I hear that sweet sigh I wrap my mind around yours rock myself to sleep our secret

Comments (15)

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THROBBE

11:02AM | Mon, 12 October 2009

Great poem!

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Meisiekind

11:11AM | Mon, 12 October 2009

WOW - I feel the passion and emotion in this poem Marilyn! Amazing ! I do believe we have to catch up soon!!! grin

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faroutsider

11:33AM | Mon, 12 October 2009

Beautifully expressed intimacy. Thanks for sharing your secret (I won't let it go any further...)

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durleybeachbum

12:23PM | Mon, 12 October 2009

I love that last line!

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bmac62

12:28PM | Mon, 12 October 2009

Makes the mind wander:) Really draws you in...just like listenting to quiet whispers. Well done.

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hipps13

4:02PM | Mon, 12 October 2009

wonderful words warm hugs, Linda

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mermaid

4:09PM | Mon, 12 October 2009

wonderful touching words!

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elfin12u

6:42PM | Mon, 12 October 2009

Beautiful and so intimate, I like this a lot!!!

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danapommet

10:27PM | Mon, 12 October 2009

A real secret life that these words project. Tender and touching. Wonderful poem. Dana

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auntietk

10:49PM | Mon, 12 October 2009

This has such a light touch, a soft feel ... beautifully written.

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bazza

12:41AM | Tue, 13 October 2009

Nice words and work well done!!

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vaggabondd

8:27PM | Tue, 13 October 2009

Wow this is so good. this is a 5 +++++++++ all day long

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elfin14doaks

5:31PM | Wed, 14 October 2009

WOW, That is incredible! Girl you can write! I love the last line . WOW.

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Digitaleagle

11:55AM | Thu, 15 October 2009

A wonderful loving feel with a little mystery thrown in Beautifully written, and a beautiful scene to accompany the text!!

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Chipka

3:08AM | Mon, 26 October 2009

"I wrap my mind around yours and rock myself to sleep" HOLY COW! The whole poem rocks but that last line just make my brain pop. This is profound. Amazing. Sensual and rich in emotion. WOW. Just simply, WOW!