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Description
secrets
you and i know
about the
late night
moments
we share
the talk
the secrets
so close
you'd never know
how far apart
we really are
no one else
knows
what we say
how we sound
those times
so special
soft
dreamy
more real
sometimes
than real
our secret
life
hidden from
the world
nighttime
dark outside
light in our
hearts
and minds
and souls
only for us
a few words
whispered
spoken so
quietly
sometimes i
wonder
if you are
really there
then I hear
that sweet
sigh
I wrap my mind
around yours
rock myself
to sleep
our secret
Comments (15)
THROBBE
Great poem!
Meisiekind
WOW - I feel the passion and emotion in this poem Marilyn! Amazing ! I do believe we have to catch up soon!!! grin
faroutsider
Beautifully expressed intimacy. Thanks for sharing your secret (I won't let it go any further...)
durleybeachbum
I love that last line!
bmac62
Makes the mind wander:) Really draws you in...just like listenting to quiet whispers. Well done.
hipps13
wonderful words warm hugs, Linda
mermaid
wonderful touching words!
elfin12u
Beautiful and so intimate, I like this a lot!!!
danapommet
A real secret life that these words project. Tender and touching. Wonderful poem. Dana
auntietk
This has such a light touch, a soft feel ... beautifully written.
bazza
Nice words and work well done!!
vaggabondd
Wow this is so good. this is a 5 +++++++++ all day long
elfin14doaks
WOW, That is incredible! Girl you can write! I love the last line . WOW.
Digitaleagle
A wonderful loving feel with a little mystery thrown in Beautifully written, and a beautiful scene to accompany the text!!
Chipka
"I wrap my mind around yours and rock myself to sleep" HOLY COW! The whole poem rocks but that last line just make my brain pop. This is profound. Amazing. Sensual and rich in emotion. WOW. Just simply, WOW!