My first Poem 'Paper Boat Boy' by greensleeves81

2D • Illustration • posted on Dec 22, 2009

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Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! to all my Rendo' friends. I hope you like this poem and the story. Does this story have any relevance with Christmas? Have a closer look at the illustration. who is the boy behind the every star and glitters of X'mas. What we have done to him? Since the first of this december I wrote few more poems, a short story, and a song for the Christmas.

Comments (11)

lucindawind

3:46PM | Tue, 22 December 2009

its wonderful... Merry Christmas to you as well !

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flavia49

4:46PM | Tue, 22 December 2009

fantastic poem and image!!! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you too!

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sandra46

5:15PM | Tue, 22 December 2009

fantastic creation, thank you!

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virginiese Online Now!

9:36AM | Wed, 23 December 2009

excellent illustration for your poem !

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Hendesse

12:07PM | Wed, 23 December 2009

Excellent and very creative composition. Thanks for sharing. Merry Christmas to you too!

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flora-crassella

12:08PM | Wed, 23 December 2009

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you too!!!!

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tennesseecowgirl

12:16PM | Wed, 23 December 2009

Touching story, and wonderful illustration to go along with it. Hope to see more. Wishing you a Merry Christmas.

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lyron

6:59AM | Thu, 24 December 2009

Great poem and illustration. Happy Holidays to you too!!!!

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e-brink

9:05PM | Fri, 08 January 2010

An excellent presentation. Very nice work.

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myrrhluz

1:13AM | Wed, 24 March 2010

Thank you for your elaboration on your poem. I saw a connection with Christ but couldn't quite understand it. This is a very pertinent poem throughout man's history. We are forever taking an idea or a person and twisting it until it no longer resembles what it started as. Whenever an idea gains popularity and power it loses much if not all of its value as it is manipulated to serve a select and powerful few. I love your progression in your poem. It goes from a missing and unloved boy, to stories woven about him, to other happenings woven into his story, to great feats attributed to him, to an industry and political party built around him. Then when he was found and did not fit in with the icon he had become, he was beaten and driven away. Excellent work and presentation.

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