I Know Where You Were Today by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on Dec 30, 2009

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I know where you were today I was sitting alone Not really thinking of anything When you came to me You moved through me I felt your soul touch my soul It made me weak And humble I closed my eyes Felt your lips Touch my lips You took my breath away I looked around To see if anyone was looking at me I felt like they must be able to see it in my face But no one noticed And them you were gone I quickly looked at my watch At 11:25 this morning I know where you were at

Comments (15)

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Faemike55

6:34PM | Wed, 30 December 2009

Very moving words, Randy!

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beachzz

6:40PM | Wed, 30 December 2009

i've had moments like that--you so often put into words the same things i think and feel!!

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Rainastorm

8:14PM | Wed, 30 December 2009

Oh yes, had times like this my friend...I agree beachzz...he does the same to me! lol

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myrrhluz

8:18PM | Wed, 30 December 2009

Wonderful magic you weave with your words!

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Merrylee

8:33PM | Wed, 30 December 2009

Very touching poem...Happy New's Years Randy

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hipps13

8:37PM | Wed, 30 December 2009

wonderful work, Randy warm hugs smile, Linda

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brycek

9:02PM | Wed, 30 December 2009

Beautiful words Randy..Happy New Year!!

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wysiwig

10:42PM | Wed, 30 December 2009

"I closed my eyes Felt your lips Touch my lips You took my breath away" Such is the power of your imagery that I remembered my first kiss as I read your words and the slight tingle of electricity that I felt in my lips. And, yes, I was breathless.

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