Battles In My Mind by vaggabondd

Writers • Realism • posted on Jan 02, 2010

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Sitting in my little corner of the world I feel so alone Everything I want Just seems to be out of reach Time slips by so slow As the nights drag on My misery Makes me want to sleep My misery Keeps me awake I am a warrior Who is so tired of the fight Every single day Is a battle A battle in my mind

Comments (15)

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Rainastorm

8:10AM | Sat, 02 January 2010

Again, as if you are writing my thoughts Randy. WELL SAID! :-)

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Primal

9:18AM | Sat, 02 January 2010

Strong words,Excellent Poetry!

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Faemike55

10:42AM | Sat, 02 January 2010

Very powerful writing!

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miashadows

10:58AM | Sat, 02 January 2010

Amen.Wonderful poem Randy !

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beachzz

11:24AM | Sat, 02 January 2010

fighting with ourselves is a losing battle

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myrrhluz

8:17PM | Sat, 02 January 2010

Beautifully written from deep within. It is during troubled sleep, in the small hours of the mourning that these feelings hold sway. Wonderful poetry!

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wysiwig

9:30PM | Sat, 02 January 2010

Strong words. I know the feeling but after surveying the ashes of the life I had built I came to realize that what I was looking at was cleared ground, ready for something new. I sleep very well now days.

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dakotabluemoon

7:51AM | Sun, 03 January 2010

Words that one feels and can only come from the heart that feels this pain and the pain that comes from the heart can be worse than the body ever feels to succumb to a heartache like this, well done sweets.

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