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Critique Pin-ups posted on Jan 04, 2010
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So, I've been spending a bit more time with Poser again lately (upgraded CPU being a big part of that) and playing with some new additions to my runtime and some other stuff that's been there for a while. So, I decided to give She-Freak 4 a spin, then kept at it. Instead of a muscle dominated look (not really my thing), I wanted to go for a mix of curves and muscle, enough of both to give her form, but without letting either aspect take over. Someone who would be comfortable in a gym, at the beach, hitting the nightclub or turning heads with her looks as she walked down the street I only spun a handful of the available dials and I liked the results. A little bit more tweaking and I liked it more. I'm happy with the body as it is at this point and might work on her face some, while the texture and hair makes for a combo that I think I'll stick with. So, here she is. But the question is, did I hit the Goldilocks mark of just right, is it too much, or not enough? Do I need to keep going, or can I move her to the 'keep around for future renders' folder? Poser 6 Firely render, no postwork, cropping or resizing. Thanks for taking a look.

Comments (15)


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Faemike55

7:45PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

She looks great and she would turn my head if she walked by me. My own personal preference is that she is a bit too large in the bust. but other than that, she looks great!

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mikeerson

7:53PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

Yeah, keep her around, she's a keeper... she looks like she's on vacation letting lose a bit, but I bet she wears a uniform at work and is pretty pissy most of the time. that's my take,

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bazza

7:58PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

I think she looks great definitely worth keeping her around but could try making her younger sister with slightly smaller bust (just for faemike55) lol excellent work and Fav

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meselfr

7:59PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

fantastic character! nice work :)

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Robert0921

8:09PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

Very nice. I like her build, big but healthy!

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Madbat

8:09PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

Definitly a keeper I'd say. She looks a lot more natural than what I usually render, and most female bodybuilders and fitness models don't go all year at contest weight anyway...that's down to something like 5% body fat or less.

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Revelation-23

9:09PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

Thanks for the comments so far! The last change before this render was to make her less top heavy. I thought it looked alright (but hey, that's me!), but this bikini couldn't quite keep up, and I hadn't even had them dialed to where I often find myself for some reason I don't deny when I'm in Poser. I dunno, maybe I'll work on the breasts some, but I didn't want to scale back too much - I think they help with the balance between muscular and curvy. Maybe it's time to check out NGM/NBM one of these days and see if either or both) can add to this. Which is probably.

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JOELGLAINE

2:38AM | Tue, 05 January 2010

I'd say you hit the compromise mark between curvy and muscular at the midpoint. It looks like perfect balance between the two extremes. Looks like a strong, powerful woman ,but DEFINITELY not a monster! Good job at hitting the mark just spot on,IMO! If she was more muscular, her breasts would definitely shrink!

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njb2000

4:34AM | Tue, 05 January 2010

Nice curve mix!

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JohnSmall

8:22AM | Tue, 05 January 2010

I think I'm in love...

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ZanderXL

10:54AM | Tue, 05 January 2010

She's a great looking girl. You can tell that she has a lot of power but not the kind from pumped-up muscles. You've achieved that effect very well. The bust is proportionally correct, given the width of her shoulders and the size of her frame. NGM is good to play around with if you get a chance. I would maybe suggest that her hips be just a TOUCH wider. It was the only thing that stood out to me when I looked at this. It would maybe balance the lower body more with that large upper-body Not much, just a bit. It will also add to the curvaceous look. It is, of course, just my opinion. It'd be great to see her in more work so definitely keep her around! Nice to see a powerful, believeable woman that isn't a She-Hulk.

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Revelation-23

7:17PM | Tue, 05 January 2010

Hmmm, okay, work on the hips a little bit. Sounds good to me. I suppose I should also find out how tall she would be and dig out PhilC's Poser Tool Box to take her measurements to see how she stacks up. I've done a couple more renders with different lighting and/or poses; this is still my favorite of what I've rendered with her so far. I have a couple things in mind, and only one involves being at a gym, which was the initial idea and why I decided to make her like this istead of using She-Freak's muscular physique. Anyhoo, thanks for the feedback! Keep 'em coming.

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ragouc

12:07PM | Sun, 10 January 2010

Gorgeous character

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QUEST-CHRONICLER

3:39AM | Fri, 15 January 2010

I like the more muscular (and busty, LOL) looking 3D models, personally, but I also like this image too! Very nice pose & character design!

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rikomortis

8:39PM | Sun, 24 July 2011

Outstanding!


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