How About Now? by Revelation-23

Critique • Pin-ups • posted on Jan 06, 2010

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Well, here she is again. At the suggestion of ZanderXL, I did widen her hips a bit, as well as the waist. I also tweaked her face a bit - her face is a bit longer and I adjusted her nose, plus a slight bit with the eyes. Obviously, I decided to change the bikini to a pink one, in case that would help. Which I think it does in this case. Sorry, Faemike, I left the breasts alone. Try to not pay too much attention to her shadow; the lighting, the way I have her positioned and the bikini contribute to how top heavy she looks in these renders according to the shadow. She's really not that well endowed. But I'll get to that next - and no, I don't intend to give her bigger chesticles. Barring any other tweaks, this is going to move on to more of a study of sorts, as some thoughts came to mind while working with her in different poses, outfits and such. And doing so might help me out with something I've thought about trying for a while now. And yes, she'll be a part of that - or at least the first part. Same setup as previous image - lights, pose, camera, render settings (around 4 hours or so to render this, by my estimate) - no crop, no resize.

Comments (17)

MimiSoleil

4:14PM | Wed, 06 January 2010

Oh my, she's delicious!

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KaiArt

4:24PM | Wed, 06 January 2010

Excellent work

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Half-Baked

4:55PM | Wed, 06 January 2010

Beautiful render and excellent body sculpting for a natural look!

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Faemike55

5:25PM | Wed, 06 January 2010

She does look better. One thing that stands out is her smile. As far as I'm concerned, a lady can have the most perfect body around, but if she doesn' smile when she's posing, it won't matter, I'd actually turn her away.

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0rest4wicked

5:41PM | Wed, 06 January 2010

Voluptuous!!

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Robert0921

6:19PM | Wed, 06 January 2010

I still like her. Strong.

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ZanderXL

8:10PM | Wed, 06 January 2010

I'm honoured you thought my comments were worth anything, thanks! This is a great female figure. I think you would be wise in leaving the breasts as they are. If they go any bigger it would start to look a bit OTT - any smaller and it would throw her proportion balance off. Great work here. Can't wait to see what you have planned for her. Does she have a name yet?

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mikeerson

12:33AM | Thu, 07 January 2010

I like your little changes, but a different pose would of made a whole lot a diffecrence.... I for one think she needs a neck... and a different expression... to me, her expression is one of laughter at the sight of someone get hurt - so, I reccommend these changes. 1. Add Neck lenged 2. Change expression. 3. change pose.

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wliebtposer

2:29AM | Thu, 07 January 2010

nice work

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Revelation-23

7:32PM | Thu, 07 January 2010

Thanks again, guys! Next time around will be a different pose/expression. And outfit. Well, okay, maybe another outfit will come later. As I said, I have a couple more things to explore before putting her to work in renders. I wanted to keep the two renders about the same (aside from the change in bikini colors), as with some other critiques/WIP's I've seen. As for the neck... we'll see. Maybe it's the hair or the positioning of her head with this pose, but she does have one! She has no name right now, other than SF4F.pz3 in my Save folder. I haven't made any textures of my own (I suck at texturing and don't have much for resources) and the morphs I use are usually a combination of stuff I have - sometimes using morphs from a different character in my runtime as a start. So, I don't really get into giving names to what I end up with in my renders, althouh I did finally settle a name for the V3 seen in a handful of my older renders, last seen in "Waiting For Stephanie" as one of the pictures on the wall. She'll be back, but I'm not sure if anyone's going to care for what I have in mind next, whcih will take two or three posts. It's on my mind and I'm gonna go with it.

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