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A Few People Cry

Writers Realism posted on Jan 11, 2010
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Standing in a mist On a cloudy, cloudy day My soul is drenched And I am tired I have ran so many miles And I am right back where I started You think you can change Who you are But you are wrong And everyone you know Is there to remind you I remember watching a coin toss Thinking there was a winner And a loser But there are no winners Only survivors The finish line is a 1,000 miles away And no one ever finishes They run until they die And if you are lucky A few people cry

Comments (16)


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Bossie_Boots

2:22AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

That touches a nerve excellent writing Randy hugs lou x

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JSGraphics

2:23AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

Outstanding work! Well Done!

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mermaid

2:39AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

definitly touching, Randy, and gets me to an inner rebellion at the same time, my little self struggling to see the positive sides and alimenting the small plant of hope that there will be a brighter light another day...

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wysiwig

4:08AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

Oh man, this one sent chills down my spine! This really hits close to home. One of your best.

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adrie

4:42AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

Fabulous writing my dear friend, just love this!

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miashadows

8:26AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

The truth in purest form.Wonderful poem Randy !Stay who you are ..it's all you can be sure of .....

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Primal

8:48AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

I hope the finish line isnt to soon..Excellent Poetry my friend..

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Faemike55

8:56AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

Very good writing, Randy!

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mrestey

9:06AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

A very moving and insightful poem. VERY true too. Thanks for sharing.

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drifterlee

9:17AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

I read something a long time ago. "No matter how hard you try, you're just passing time until you die. A gloomy thought.

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dakotabluemoon

10:25AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

Wow so powerful and well said i am so impressed by ur words and i can see a heart i have never seen in any man before keep up the good work.

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Rainastorm

10:32AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

So true so right Randy

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brycek

11:36AM | Mon, 11 January 2010

Wonderful poem Randy!!

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myrrhluz

1:25AM | Tue, 12 January 2010

Your words are beautiful and bleak! Excellent writing!

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Merrylee

2:28PM | Tue, 12 January 2010

Good one Randy...

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Lisajobb

5:21PM | Wed, 13 January 2010

This really is one of your best works yet Randy. I think this has touched a nerve with most of us here. Beautifully crafted.


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