Her Name Is Ravenesque by JackStr8
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Description
This is my first Poser image, so feel free to be brutal. I'll put some clothes and blood on the guy when I can find something I like. Ravenesque's phenomenal armor by Nerd, sword and trees found on 3D Cafe. Everything else in Bryce. Whadaya think?
Comments (3)
pbrain
Good for a first image. Her pose is natural, his is not. His elbow should touch the ground (if he's dead). Blood on sword and her also. A big plus is to play around with the hair, everybody is useing that hair prop. Same with the armor, add a belt and scabard, maybe a Left only shoulder guard. Or a rope tied to both of there left wrists. Personalize it Jack.
roobol
Welcome, Jack. I agree with pbrain. An additional remark is that the Poser part takes over the image and not enough detail is spent to the rest of the composition. The terrain is way to flat and the trees, although detailed and welll done, are braking all composition lines. Try some renders in Bryce (import poser figures as ungrouped wavefront objects to allow texture mapping). Keep on going, you're in for a good start and I'm looking forward to what follows. Cheers, Kees
deap
The object on the left hand side of the image looks more like the inclined wall of a fortification than a tree trunk. Guy's right foot/ankle don't come together correctly. I'm also bothered that she seems to think it's such an acclomplishment to have killed an unarmed, naked, bald guy with no texture. Like the background more than the figures.