haiku dream by beachzz
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Description
just a dream
we do all have dreams
falling asleep
dreaming of
wonderful things
sometimes
they come true
sometimes
they don't
haiku dream
asleep and dreaming
i am awakened early
and my dream comes true
1/17/10
Comments (9)
digggger
perfect---i love having one of those dreams where you wake up and just want to go right back to sleep.
hipps13
sometimes they do and the surprises what brings warm hugs, Linda
durleybeachbum
Excellent.. I must get to grips with this form.
ShadowsNTime
Haiku is fairly new to me, I am going to have to study some on it. But! This is great, very clear intent in the words and if your dream came true, Yay! good for you!!! Excellent writing!
bmac62
Nicely done Marilyn. I have come to grips with this form but now I am reluctant to try and embarrass myself. LOL.
bazza
Nice work on this writing Marilyn well done..
Chipka
Haiku is so much fun, especially if you go old school with it, like Basho and Chiyo-ni. They are among my favorite poets, and there are some modern Haiku masters, but I can't recall their names. Haiku is alive and well the world over, but very little of it is actually "old school" but that's okay...it's still fun. And in the spirit of Haiku, my favorite poetic form, I'll finish my comment in reference to the way this inspired me. The words of a poem Twist quietly and dream-like I sit in silence.
Meisiekind
Marvelous writing Marilyn! :)
auntietk
I love your haiku. This is beautifully done!