Traveling Cowgirls - improved by shrinkers
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The orginal version of this is here. I think this one is much better.
brewgirlca gave me some wonderful suggestions. I think it all came out pretty well!
I'm working hard on Chapter Three. I hope to have quite a lot of it ready in a couple weeks...
I did some postwork in Gimp after some of the comments :) . Please take a look full-sized!
Comments (20)
Faemike55
Very nice work! what are they traveling through? Looks like ghost water!
shrinkers
LOL It's supposed to be dust, Mike!
brewgirlca
Much better, especially in full view. Now the viewer is part of the action. Moving Chika out and forward works great as now you have a lot of width as well as depth. And she is about to run over the viewer! Having Lucky looking towards the viewer also draws you in... but what is keeping her top from blowing open? Just a lucky flap of the breeze :-)? Hair is now all flying. They look like a gang on a mission. But that dust. Oh my it looks a bit like they are going through transluscent rock. Dust needs not to have such sharp edges. Here you really need some postwork with your soften brush or to not render in the dust but to brush it in with some fog brushes. Do that fix and this image will be totally smashing.
pizzaface2101
this is neato :) it reminds me of that movie bad girls ...thnx for sharing it
lior
This scene is better than the aother one!
jocko500
wonderful
ThetaLov
Much better, I do see the improvements! I like this angle much better as well. AND OMG 100th UPLOAD!!!!!11!1!!one
Tholian
Indeed this is MUCH improved. I like the motion blur you've managed on the wheels. The POV is excellent and the background scenery now pulls everything together. Great and tedious work, but worth every minute. Bravo!
mgtcs
Amazing image, fantastic scene and narrative, excellent work!
Cimaira
fantastic scene and great movement
JOELGLAINE
This is much more dramatic. A hundred percent better. A lot of the time just a camera angle can change everything. Keep getting better!
Darkwish
Beautiful image.
UteBigSmile
Nice mixture of old and new, cool work very well done!!!! Have a great day, hug's Ute
Pierrot_Lunaire
I think that it's a very beautiful composition, maybe better than other but I like both. For the camera views are different thinking the watcher but both ok. Great details cure in full size view. Excellent work!
SIGMAWORLD
Excellent image!
Savage_dragon
Nearly perfect. I agree about the dust. I find it much easier, & a better outcome, to use brushes for the dust in post work. I can see a lot of heart went into this. Bravo! ")
Nickieboy2004
Very cool!
e-brink
Nice scene! Much better composition.
jarmila
fantastic scenery, the woman in moto and horses, great job..ciao,happy week
PSDuck
Super POV! Much better! Is the sunscreen in their day better than ours? I hope so! (Or maybe the sun is putting out less UV. Hmmm, sci-fi overload here!)