I Am Immortal by vaggabondd
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Seeing you walking down our beach
Sends chills up my spine
The sunset is behind you
Because nothing comes before you
The warmth of your soul
Puts the sparkle in your eyes
The tenderness of your way
Puts the smile on my face
When you speak to me
I listen
When you sing to me
I dream
When you touch my face
I am weak
When you tell me you love me
I am strong
When you kiss my lips
I am immortal
Comments (16)
Faemike55
Randy, you are one hell of a word-smith! Excellent as always
beachzz
You do know how to say things, those things we all so much want to hear.
flaviok
um poema que toca a profundidade do amor meu amigo, magnifico, aplausos (5)
bcrathburn
WONDERFUL WORDS
myrrhluz
Wonderful poem! You words flow so beautifully.
wysiwig
Oh man this is really good, especially the last half.
adrie
Such a beautiful poem my friend, love it.
dakotabluemoon
A very well written piece of true love from the heart fantastic work.
Primal
Ahhhh The powers of love!!Excellent Poetry my friend,from the heart..
miashadows
Beautiful !!
Rainastorm
BEAUTIFUL words my friend-)
Merrylee
Well done my friend Randy...
drifterlee
Beautiful!
hipps13
wish I were maybe the gray would stay away wonderful work, Randy warm hugs, Linda
gypsyflame
Beautiful as always...you should write professionally!
Lisajobb
I agree with gypsyflame. You have to get your work published Randy..