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Something In Me by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on Feb 04, 2010
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You found me lying dead Face down in the grass Buried alive in my shame For some strange reason You saw something in me Something worth saving So layer by layer Piece by piece You uncovered me Picked me up Dusted me off Gave me value Now I was worth something Something to you Something to me Your lips touched mine Breathed life into my soul Set me free Because you saw something Something in me

Comments (13)

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Faemike55

12:05AM | Thu, 04 February 2010

WOW! Very beautiful writing, Randy

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flaviok

6:57AM | Thu, 04 February 2010

Intimista e romantico, que linha poetica fascinante meu amigo, aplausos (5)

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Bossie_Boots

7:10AM | Thu, 04 February 2010

WOW very romantic superb writing hugs lou x

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dakotabluemoon

7:29AM | Thu, 04 February 2010

Sounds like some of the soap operas they die and always bring them back again LOL but i like this u seem to put ur heart into so much of ur work and ur lady is so lucky to have such a wonderful romantic partner as u.

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Merrylee

11:48AM | Thu, 04 February 2010

Very nice my friend...

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drifterlee

12:51PM | Thu, 04 February 2010

Wonderful poem!

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adrie

1:58PM | Thu, 04 February 2010

Wonderful writing Randy, love it.

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wysiwig

11:24PM | Thu, 04 February 2010

If you don't have the ladies chasing after you all the time I will be very surprised. This is just wonderful and, yes, your lady is very lucky.

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myrrhluz

11:38PM | Thu, 04 February 2010

This is wonderful! So well written, lyrical and of beautiful sentiment! Very nicely done!

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miashadows

5:36AM | Fri, 05 February 2010

WOW...one of your best Randy !

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Rainastorm

7:08AM | Sat, 06 February 2010

So excellent....

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kasalin

3:07PM | Sat, 06 February 2010

Excellent words and work, well done, dear Randy !!! "Five stars" :) Hugs Karin:)

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Lisajobb

4:30PM | Sat, 20 February 2010

i really like this one. superbly written.

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