7 Valkyries - Chapter Three, Part 1 by shrinkers
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For anyone who wants to read the story from the beginning, you can find it here - 7valkyries.webhop.net. I promise, it won't take you more than ten minutes to read :-)
Thank you to all my friends who have been so supportive and positive. I'm sorry I haven't been commenting so much lately. I've been back at work, and darn it, Real Life is a pain. I hope to catch up some this weekend.
Thanks for reading and looking!
Comments (15)
mgtcs
WOW....Great work, you did an excellent composition here my friend, amazing chapter!
JOELGLAINE
Good,cinematic flow of the panels. Good scenes and lighting. The bald chick just doesn't look right, though. She doesn't have a real look to her. something wrong I can't put my finger on really breaks me out of the story. If I knew, I'd tell you. Good episode,otherwise.
ThetaLov
Hmmm, big corporate types usually equal trouble. Especially when they look creepy! ;P Nice intro to the next chapter! And that thing about real-life? ...it's getting in my way right now too. WE WILL PERSEVERE!!
Faemike55
Great start on the new chapter! things are starting to get interesting
brewgirlca
Excellent start on the new chapter! You have come a long way my friend from your first tentative panels in this story. The work has flow and the characters have chemistry. I like the accent you gave the hunter, it gives him a special character... a bad guy but not all bad, just a guy with a job to do. Especially like how you have ended off on a classic spaghetti western style
renecyberdoc
first i must say i opened your site in a new tab because it takes and it deserves far more than 10 minutes to view and respect all.i will keep it till the end to read tranquilo.fantastic
UteBigSmile
A completely agree with my hubby.....wonderful work!!! Wish you a nice weekend, Ute
MineFujiko
Superb work! love last wide scene! so cool!
Pierrot_Lunaire
Excellent work! Great!!!
lior
It's so great!
atlas7
Great work !! 5+
Darkwish
Really nicely done.
PSDuck
Yup, "what could ever get in your way?" indeed. Not a "what" but a "who"! I knew it! The Strixies are just corporate lawyers! I hope the girls bag 'em all!
Tholian
Love it!
SidheRoseGraphics
Smellin' a corporate rat here. Lovin' these characters. Great dialogue and again your last panel is killer. It says so much without saying anything at all ;)