Feelings Out of Time
by JOELGLAINE
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Sunshine told Toxic,"Nuh-HUNH!Mommy told me it'd be alright if we were cleared, BUT we haven't been cleared yet! It's for Coodle's own good. You KNOW if we go on alert and stuff, we couldn't put him up in time!"
Toxic said sadly,"I wanna see COODLE!"
Sunshine said,"I do,TOO, but we can't!We... what's that sound?"
Toxic leaped to her feet and Sunshine stood up in her seat as they heard a girl scream and the sound of running feet. A young girl ran up the stairs and stopped in front of Toxic in shock. She blink her three eyes and gasped in terror. Behind her, the Haen leaped up and turned in an instant.
Toxic grabbed the girl and swept her behind her and materialized her power sword. Haen padded forward a few steps and stood there. Her force glaive crackled softly as she said,"Stand away from that girl! She is breaking the law! I need to take that criminal into custody!"
Toxic growled, her eyes flickering like embers in a high wind. "NO. You try to hurt China and I WILL KILL YOU! She is like my own child and NO ONE hurts China OR Sunny!"
Haen blinked in surprise. "Wait a minute! HOW do you know her name? At this point in the time-lime... SHE ISN'T EVEN BORN,yet! I was transvecting here, when I was diverted to the Cross-trainer Corvette where..."
Toxic snapped,"...her mommy is carrying her! Duhr. I KNOW stuff. I don't know WHY other people don't know stuff. Bluebell and I were dead for a long time together. She and Kella are my sisters! Their children are mine,too! Larka's feeling for you were THEN, and MY feeling for China are TO COME! They are stronger, and if you try to take China, I will chop you to BITS! I kicked Kali's butt! I'll send you home in a bucket if you attack us."
Haen frowned, and eyed the orange blade simmering in Toxic's hands. "Kali? I doubt it! She's a Druaga working for the Erhlutians! Your sword does look like one of her's..."
Toxic said,"I took it from her and chopped her hand off with it, right before I SMACKED HER IN THE EAR WITH AN ANDROID WITH AN ATOM BOMB IN HER BUTT! I blew her skin and hair off and I was ready to keep going! She had chopped me up and I was SO angry! I kept my temper and Jin made me COOKIES because I was so good! Hmmmmmm, COOKIES! They were chocolate,too!" Toxic's pleasure of the memory was comical. Haen laughed and put her glaive out.
Toxic said as she put her sword out,"If you try anything,"I'll change into a bid bird and peck you to death with my big pecker!"
Sunny leaned forward and smacked Toxic in the head with a slap. "Don't talk like that, potty mouth! It is a BEAK! NOT a big pecker!"
China looked at Sunny and said,"You can't be Miss Sunshine! You're way too young! You sound like her!" She turned and leaned up against Toxic's back and sighed. "Thank you,Aunt Tok-tok!"
Starshine, who had been floating over Sunny's head, suddenly tinkled like a thousand small bells. Sunny and Toxic laughed.
Haen suddenly looked at the glowing ball and asked,"WHAT IS THAT?"
Sunny looked nervous as she said,"That's Starshine. She's of the Race of Abel. From the Boneyard worlds?"
"She said that Kali is on the planet and I might need to kick her butt again! She doesn't have any good sense!" Toxic smiled at the glowing ball. Sunny looked shocked.
"YOU CAN UNDERSTAND HER?" Sunny looked up and back.
Toxic nodded and exclaimed,"YEPPERS. Since the planet-moon thingy where I kicked Kali's butt told me how. I talked with Starshine a couple of times since. Why?"
Haen asked,"Toxic? Do you know EVERYONE you meet? Even when You never met them before?"
Toxic shrugged. "Of course! Doesn't every body? We need to get to the planet before Kali gets more pissed off. China, stay here until you go back ahead. Alright? Haen, we need to go."
China hugged Toxic. Toxic said,"Sunny! Take care of her! She's your niece!"
Toxic grabbed Haen's hand and they disappeared.
Sunny said,"Uhm, hi."
Sunny sat in the now awkward silence.
-To be continued!-
Comments (12)
Imaginatos
NICE done ! :)
Madbat
Lmao..."Uhm, hi." I love the dialogue in this one and these extended awkward moments...great stuff!
JOELGLAINE
Previous mention of Time Travel and Toxic on it: http://joelglaine.deviantart.com/art/Mess-Hall-Dinner-Conversation-139252269
myrrhluz
Wonderful dialog! These family relations are getting complicated, especially with time now thrown into the mix. Toxic is definitely an unknown entity, and as fascinating to Haen as to the rest of us. Love the younger Sunny's reaction to being left with her niece. Excellent image! Wonderful poses and expressions! Nice textures, shading and highlights on the outfits. Love Toxic's sword and the view outside. Great episode!
DangerousThing
Aunt Toc-Toc. LOL! Thank you.
MineFujiko
Cool! Nice light saber!
SIGMAWORLD
Excellent sci fi!
CrownPrince
OOhh kay.. The cat is out of the bag. Sunny with her child-like innocence told The Haen, that they have a member of the supposedly extinct race of Able, who is also a survivor from the Boneyard worlds. Bigga badda-bing, bigga badda boom! Now what? Itappears toxic actually is awarene, at least to a small degree of her entire time line. Extracting knowlege (again of a limited type)upon the moment of contact. Has she ALWAYS had this ability? Or did intersecting with the other instramentality add something to her hyperframe? Haen wanted to know how dangerous and powerful the new incarnation of the four sisters is, well i noticed she shut off her glaive after finding out Toxic kicked Kali's behind. And Kali will be so pleased to see Toxic again... lololol! Wow and Toxic is even more powerful than before. Real interesting how Toxics vocabulary improved during a time of stress also. Her wording became very concise. Thats kinda scary.
shrinkers
Nice plot twists! Great poses and wonderful composition.
MagikUnicorn
Excellent use of colours
ldgilman
This is SSOOOOOOOOO good, the writing takes me there and it is exciting!!!!!! It would be easy to rate everything you have written and the accomping graphics at 10. Now that I have read most of the story atarting at A, a lot has been filled in.
ontar1
Fantastic, outstanding work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!