falling to pieces by beachzz
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Description
falling to pieces
stop to pick up all the parts
put me together
6/19/10
Comments (9)
auntietk
Perfect image for this haiku. Nicely done!
durleybeachbum
Such skill!
Meisiekind
WOW! Just wonderful!
goodoleboy
Stellar depiction of this hodgepodge of what looks like ice, water, cellophane, something pouring water, a salt shaker, and rich pastry down at the lower right, Marilyn.
jocko500
wow this is super
bmac62
So few words in haiku...such a smashing photo...so rich in meaning.
danapommet
Sad to think what it was and if it could ever look the same. Wonderful words and image. Dana
hipps13
and left a hole wonderful work warm hugs, Linda
Chipka
I love your haiku! I love haiku in general; it's such a profound thing. Traditionally (at least in 14th century Japan) hauku was best performed rather than written: the poem-form was often used as a kind of greeting between poets. One would make up a haiku on the spot, the other would respond with another improvised haiku that served as a counterpoint to the first one. Every time I read one of your haikus, I think of you in old Edo (in green flip flops) just taking in the sights and smells just as some haiku master ambles by, recognizes you and utters 17 distinct syllables that make perfect poetic and spiritual sense. I kinda like that image. I'm glad I finally got around to commenting on this! It's quite compelling and elegant and the picture accompaniment to it is poetic in its own right. Yeah. I like this!