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Whole Lotta Shakin Goin On

Writers Realism posted on Mar 31, 2011
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I was looking thru some old files and found this poem I wrote after an earthquake we had here about a year and half ago. It did some damage, but nothing compared to the one in Japan. Whole Lotta Shakin Goin On Rockin and Rollin Shakin And shiverin Jumpin and Jiving The earth Danced Its crazy jitterbug The music Of breaking Glass Filled the air The unexpected Concert Caused buildings To dance Their Asses off It was a Dance of death And destruction For some Of those Old places For they Really weren’t Strong enough For such A lively step So today I watch As we bury Those old Stalwarts Brave Strong Indestructible We thought Brick by brick They came down And the music Goes on

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bazza

11:29PM | Thu, 31 March 2011

Lovely words in this Marilyn well done!!

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Faemike55

11:43PM | Thu, 31 March 2011

Yeah!Mother Nature creates and dances to her own song. it's up to man to dance to it as well.

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durleybeachbum

3:42AM | Fri, 01 April 2011

Brilliant, Marilyn!

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auntietk

11:38AM | Fri, 01 April 2011

This is fabulous! Your metaphor carries through beautifully, and gives such a sense of noise and movement. Excellent work!

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goodoleboy

6:53PM | Fri, 01 April 2011

Outstanding image and prose, Marilyn! Shake, rattle, and roll!!! Actually, I was listening to some seismologists on the radio last night and they feel that the Juan del Fuca/Cascade fault up in the state of Washington is long overdue for a 9.0 shaker any time now. That and the Madrid fault in middle America, and the Yellowstone caldera. Of course, we can't forget the California San Andreas fault either.

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jocko500

11:17PM | Fri, 01 April 2011

the poem do go well with the image.

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danapommet

11:27PM | Fri, 01 April 2011

Well written my friend and even more poignant with what has happened in Japan. Dana


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