WIP Need Crituque by X-Titan
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Hey guys and gals! I need your expert advice on this model. It's suppost to be a female face, and I think it looks like one. I need your crituque, mainly on the placement and proportions of things. I've studied several female faces, and I've used pictures of Nelly Furtado to make the model based on what she looks like. So it's suppost to be Nelly Furtado. This is rendered without any lights or textures. The ear is not complete yet, and I didn't take the time to weld the verts of the 2halfs of the face, and the eye are just there for reference, I'm not going to keep them in the final. Thanks in advance for any and all help you provide.
Comments (5)
Thr3D
She looks pretty good, but make sure her jaw isn't too pronounced, like a male jaw, and her nose shouldn't be too angular either. Of course it depends on the facial structure of the person you are creating, but more curves and less hard lines is usually a safe bet for a woman.
UrbanEspionage
I believe that the nostrils are too thin, and yes the chin is a little too pointed, but it looks great, i waam see this bad girl in da end!! =)
powerlitup
good work
X-Titan
Thanks for the great comments guys, I really find your suggestions useful. If there's anything anybody wants to add to the comments so far, feel free to.
Ttippy
I think the base of the skull at the back of the head is a little too low. Try raising that, and maybe try smoothing out the polys around her neck.