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It is so cold in my soul today

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on May 16, 2011
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It is so cold in my soul today The wind that won’t go away Is chasing me into my grave It’s cold grip Is squeezing my neck Slowly, ever so slowly Draining my will to live I have long forgotten The warm days of summer Where the sun touched my face Where I could close my eyes And dream of you Dream of us You have gone now Left me here all alone And I can no longer stand the cold

Comments (15)


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Bossie_Boots

1:12PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

Wow Randy that is such a sad poem superbly written!!

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Rainastorm

1:43PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

very well said

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mgtcs

1:56PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

Very beautiful poem, marvelous writing, so melancholic and sad, awesome! 10*

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drifterlee

2:39PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

Excellent poem!

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brycek

3:34PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

Beautiful Randy!!

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adrie

3:38PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

This is such a beautiful and sad Poem Randy, but i love it.

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Faemike55

6:15PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

The sadness permeates the mind and the soul Excellent work

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rickp98908

6:53PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

That sounds like a bad wine

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eekdog Online Now!

7:46PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

that gripping Randy, well done..

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jocko500

9:56PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

cool

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hipps13

10:32PM | Mon, 16 May 2011

makes me think time for the sun to shine again wonderful words, Randy warm hugs, Linda

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dakotabluemoon

6:23AM | Tue, 17 May 2011

Superb work peeps.

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kbrog

9:55AM | Tue, 17 May 2011

Great expression in this touching poem! :)

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wysiwig

3:43AM | Wed, 18 May 2011

When you lose the one you love it's always winter in your heart. Sad words with real impact.

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Isabelle711

11:02PM | Fri, 20 May 2011

These words you just spoke are very sweet. :)))) It is amazing how you can express such feelings with your words of how one actully feels at one point in their life. :))) Thank you for sharing your gift. :))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :)))


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