Meeting on the storm/part 1 by mininessie
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This is a short story that i wrote for a spanish steampunk forum...i did not won...but i´m happy to participate...hope is understandable in the english version...you know....i´m a bit limited on it.
Meeting in the storm
It was a spring morning ..
the breeze coming through the window of Lady
Eleanor, the curtains moving rhythmically.
"A promising day"
thought Eleanor for herself
watching the clouds pass.
Ah! clouds .. her favorite place!
No.. Not that Lady Eleanor had the
head in the clouds
as many said ....
she knew exactly what she did ...
but ... "Like father like son" ....
as the saying goes.
although Her father belonged ...
one of the best families ...
was what is commonly
known as the "black sheep".
That a lord were dedicated to making insane inventions! ....! That´s crazy!
Eleanor picked up her long hair
under the hat ready to leave.
She had something important to do ... something that would not admit it was delayed ...she owed it to her father .. because her father worked so hard on that project!
Side by side with him ... had achieved
to create an aircraft ... and
Now ... after his death ..
she was going to cover the mouths of the critics of her father.
She walked briskly and decisively towards the hangar where her plane was waiting ....
that would be a memorable day.
Boarded the ship and settled in the checkpoint.
The mechanism was complex ...
her father had
discovered something amazing ....
about using the magnetism of the earth and apply it to the ship to keep it in the air ...
(Something about the attraction-
repulsion of the poles)
.... Without affecting the inside of it,
as this would prevent the use of controls.
Also had small steam engines
to enhance the speed ... these were fed by robots, which
allowed Eleanor to handle the ship alone.
After settling, Eleanor turned the engines, found that everything worked properly, and started to fly.
At the beginning, rose slowly ....
power engines were reaching
and the magnetic force was more effective ...
Eleanor was soon in the air.
After some quiet time flying over the landscape ...
of a special beauty from the air by the way ...
Eleanor took a picnic basket, where she had the food ...
"There's nothing like enjoying a quiet meal in the clouds"
Eleanor thought, while enjoyed their favorite food.
The ship moved majestically
that leaving astonished the people that lifting the
eyes from the floor, were able to see her.
At Eleanor's eyes they were slightly larger than ants ... idea that made her smile.
Comments (33)
Minaya
She is very pretty, nice portrait!
MKeyes
I was able to follow the story just fine! Well written and well worded, and this picture illustrates it wonderfully!
dakotabluemoon
Very interesting reading and it all matches just fine.
magnus073
Love the image Ines, and the story was really one you should be proud of.
UteBigSmile
Faemike55
Very cool work, Ines Sorry you didn't win
Zathyn
Lovely!
Savage_dragon
In my eyes you won! I loved this story & your English is improving quite well. Pretty render, too. Congratz for winning our heart here! Hugz ")
renecyberdoc
absolutely lovely work and words.
apgme
Lovely!
SIGMAWORLD
Sehr schönes Bild und Story.
crender
Absolutely wonderful!!!!!
Flint_Hawk
I like your story & illustration!
Dreamingbee
wonderful portraitwork !!!
MarciaGomes
FANTÁSTICA HISTÓRIA INES,VOCÊ É MUITO CRIATIVA,BELA LADY,COMBINA PERFEITAMENTE COM A HISTÓRIA.+++++++++++5
Kindredsoul
excellent image, hope you have a great day and weekend
Bossie_Boots
Superb Ines !!
DennisReed
Wonderful image & supporting story!
bazza
Looks fabulous Ines, a very pretty lady and the story is great. A winner in my opinion :-) Your English is far better than my Spanish my friend keep it up...
mickeyrony
I like the small side and beret still a work where excellence delighted smiles of satisfaction as. Congratulations again and many thanks for sharing ((5 + +)) J'aime bien le petit côté béret et toujours un travail où l'excellence ravit les sourires de satisfactions comme . Bravo encore et mille mercis de partager ((5++))
adrie
Wonderful image and words dear Ines, excellent done.
brycek
Nice image and reading..well done!!
npauling
A super image to go with this great little story and it sounds as though she had a great day out up in the clouds.
Cimaira
Wonderful story and image.
HeavensBlonde
awesome Ines love this,
mgtcs
This is an excellent story Ines, amazing pose, amazing image, very well done!
Virtual_World
Fantastic work!
CloverLinda
HaHa...your written English is better than a lot of people I've encountered, and their first language (and only language) is English. Your image is wonderful, I love her pose, the sky outside the window and a sense of movement in the curtains. Beautiful work, top render. :)))))))))
Blush
A great image sweetie I thought you did a great job with the story I could read it with no problem at all Sounds like she had a fun time in the clouds.... Hugs Susan~
Arah
Yay! another story! wonderful work!