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If You Were A Lollipop

Writers Food posted on Dec 15, 2011
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I am just so tired I hope you don’t mind If I talk in my sleep If I don’t say it now I am afraid I will forget it When I awake I see your smile everywhere You are so cute I can’t take my eyes off of you And your voice Is adorable And nobody makes me laugh The way you do My beautiful, beautiful friend If you were a lollipop I would lick your face

Comments (16)


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Faemike55

5:27PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

Okay! Great poem not what I thought I'd read but actually better

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jocko500

5:32PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

wonderful poem

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BIPOLARTWO

5:36PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

Nice word's and colourful just like a lollypop

West_coaster07

5:42PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

Nice work Randy!!

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eekdog

6:08PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

nice one my friend.

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mgtcs

7:50PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

Very beautiful poem Randy!

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kbrog

9:03PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

Beautiful poem Randy! :)

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Isabelle711

10:23PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

There is nothing like having sweet beautiful friends. :)))) I can tell this friend means alot to you. :))) I am so very happy to have all of the friends I do here at rr. :)))))) The poem you have written is most beautiful. :)))))) Thank you for sharing what your heart feels. :)))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :)))))))))

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Merrylee

11:19PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

Very cool...lollipop, been awhile since I've heard that word

MarkR151

11:22PM | Thu, 15 December 2011

Another good poem! Thanks for sharing.

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Feliciti

1:08AM | Fri, 16 December 2011

lovely and made me a bit smile too!

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wysiwig

1:26AM | Fri, 16 December 2011

You are a great closer. The last two lines were both very sweet and hilarious.

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flaviok

4:42AM | Fri, 16 December 2011

Maravilhoso e gentil poema meu amigo, aplausos (5)

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dakotabluemoon

6:46AM | Fri, 16 December 2011

OMG this is so cute and puts a picture in my mind that my little nephew does that with everything he gets close to god forbid he has not picked up anything bad but maybe a hairball.

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drifterlee

12:45PM | Fri, 16 December 2011

Cute poem, Randy. Let's just hope you don't lick her in your sleep and discover it was your dog instead, LOL!

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myrrhluz

4:04PM | Sat, 17 December 2011

Excellent poem with wonderful rhythm, sweetness, and a funny ending. Very nicely done!


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