Description
Haln claimed a small, yellow sun and two moons for itself. The fourth of eleven planets, it traced a serene, elliptical orbit around its parent star. It bore oceans and lakes, rivers, ponds, and puddles. It held ice-caps at each of its poles. Three massive continents spread themselves across the surface, breaking the oceans with deserts and jungles, tundras, prairies, and tall, jagged mountains. Volcanoes spewed ash and magma on sporadic occasion, making new islands or depositing new soils, even as oceanic erosion claimed other little dots of land. Haln was an active planet: young, as some might judge terrestrial-type worlds. It was a temperate world, well within the range of human comfort.
There were cities on Haln.
There were people. Human. Halners.
Many of them went—as humans might—to other worlds and for the most expected, predictable reasons: for work, for education in schools with prestige attached to their names: schools like Harvard, Crissium, Oxford or Charles. They were, in comparison to other humans, quiet in their pursuits and shy in their interactions with anyone but themselves. It seemed, Drucilla often thought, that their presence on any human world was simply to observe, to test, to witness and to hear. They were, as she’d come to judge them, adamant in their common refusal to interfere. They spoke, when spoken to; they were kind, gentle, polite, and when necessary, helpful to an earnest, scrupulous degree. They were not overtly gregarious.
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There is more to the story, of course. The fragment shown above (the fragment you’ve presumably just read) is actually snatched from within a piece of fiction soon to find its way into the Writer’s gallery. I have to finish it. I have to figure out how to render the ending with maximum emotional significance. The ending, you see, deals with a startling revelation: the kind you find—most often—in science fictional tales that undermine our common assumptions of what it is to be human. I’ll finish the story soon. Quite soon, if I have my way and if my muse cooperates.
The world depicted here isn’t actually Haln…or maybe it is. I can’t really say. The world depicted here was little more than an attempt to test some of the features of a new and snazzy version of The Gimp (new and snazzy for me, that is…) I wanted to see if clickable buttons and other thingies were in the same places. I wanted to see if there were program idiosyncrasies to grow accustomed to. And so, I took a photograph of mottled, weathered concrete and turned it into a suspiciously cloudless planet. Haln, as far as I’ve written, has clouds. It has an ecology, and so it looks like an ecologically-active planet. The orb depicted in this image has no apparent clouds. If there is biological activity within the planetary gravity well depicted here, it’s somewhat different than that stuff we have here on Earth, no atmosphere to scatter light in that wonderful Photoshop way, and I haven’t yet discovered the Gimp equivalent. I will, in time.
As with other images in my gallery, the “spaceship” element is derived from the macro photograph of a rocket pack yanked from the back of a Star Wars action figure. It snaps back on, but as it makes a decent spaceship, I’ve placed it in my growing collection of photographic odds and ends. It’ll likely appear in other pieces of art as well…eventually, and—maybe—the combination of a toy rocket pack and color-tweaked shot of concrete will inspire a new story. Until such a thing happens, here’s an image, at least…a test.
I like the result.
As always, thank you for viewing, reading, and commenting, and I hope you’re all having a great week/end.
Comments (20)
wysiwig
Always great to read your writing. Its been a while. You have this wonder ful ability to leave the reader wanting more. Its a special talent. Using the rocket pack as a space ship is a brilliant idea. After all, what is a space ship but a rocket pack that wears you.
Faemike55
Wonderful story and cool image Excellent work
kgb224
Amazing work my friend. God Bless.
NefariousDrO
Ooh, I like your planet, and the faint wispy nebula looks great. That snippet of your story, however, is gonna drive me mad until I get to see the rest of it, though. I know Milton Berle advised "always leave them begging for more" and all, but man, you sure know how to tease a guy! I guess I'll just have to go make some more space ships to compensate ;)
durleybeachbum
Superb in every way!!
treasureprints
Very cool, Chip!:)
MrsRatbag
Ooh, a new story in the offing... :D Great work with worldbuilding here, Chip!
geirla
Interesting story fragment and a nice looking image!
gonedigital
Wonderful! Can't wait to read the rest of it. I love your stories and this is a great image.
auntietk
I like the planet, and using that pack thingie was inspired! Scale is everything, but it's also nothing. :P Looking forward to doing a little reading! :)
helanker
SO very beautiful indeed, Chip. Love the blue in the background :)
RodS
Very cool, Chip!
sandra46
AMAZING CREATION
lwperkins
It's a lovely world--I always want to go explore when I see a nice planet render :D You are a multitalented man!
flavia49
fantastic image and writing
Nathan_Ruby
I really liked this read. I have always thought about when we would find another planet like ours and what it would hold. I also wondered if it would be a good idea to explore it. But I look at it from a point of view from when I was a little boy and moved to a new place. I went out and explored, I wanted to see if there were other kids. I didn't want to me alone. The only kid on the block. So I guess when thinking about it that way, for me. It seems like a good idea to go explore. But I also think we should be exploring our own planet more as well. I mean they say we know more about the moon than we do about our oceans. Thank you for the short story and the cool picture that I hope you figure out how to get your ending. 5* work my friend!
netot
Great text and cool idea!
fallen21
Awesome image.
ZanderXL
Ha! After reading what the ship's source was it becomes obvious and one name leaps to mind "BOBA FETT"! I may be wrong, but it definitely looks Mandalorian in origin. Clever use of elements to achieve the image. Interesting snippet, too... fairly intriguing... will have to stay tuned.
danapommet
The best part of this image is your admission that a jet pack from a Star Wars action figure was your space ship. An excellent eye Chip and I love the final results!