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Going Up..(Mechanic)

Poser Story/Sequential posted on Dec 14, 2012
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Something changed... the walls seemed to shimmer. The picture, box top and whatever else had been laying on the floor became hazy, as if turning to sparkling particles, and disappeared falling through the concrete floor. His breathing had changed as well, now coming in shallow fast gasps as the walls began to do the same thing, revealing a darkness behind them. No, it was more than darkness, it was a nothingness. He could feel the void that filled the blackness there and it terrified him in a primal way that he had never felt before. It was as if a gaping maw had opened and wanted no more than to devour him completely. Jumping to his feet, Deschain backed away from the encroaching shadow. He stopped only when he felt the cool cement wall against his back.. he was trembling as he slowly turned, hoping the wall behind him was still intact and the door remained where he had entered. The wall indeed was there, but it too had changed. To his amazement what had been a simple cement wall and rusty door had been replaced. There in that place was a set of shiny metal elevator doors. The wall now marbled stone was ultra-modern and polished to perfection. He stood, dumbfounded for a moment, not daring to look behind him, fearing the impending doom would swallow him whole at any moment. He had no time to think, only to react. He reached his right hand out and pressed the up button on the chrome panel. The recorded female was pleasant "Going up Mr. Deschain"... the sound was sweet, but out of place here in the growing void. He could feel the darkness coming nearer, the floor falling into nothingness just behind his feet. He leaped though the opening before the doors had fully slid apart, falling against the back wall and to the carpeted floor. There was nothing outside the small elevator, nothing but black, yet there was a dread that permeated that emptiness that scared him to his core. The silence was broken by the "ding" as the door glided shut, followed by the same disembodied voice as outside.. "What floor today Mr. Deschain"? "What floor...floor, what the hell was happening", his mind was screaming. The word blurted out before he thought about it. "The top" he yelled. Instantly the car jerked into motion. He rose, shaking to his feet, trying to make any sense of this nonsensical situation. With the passing of each floor, a small red light was emitted onto the car's steel surface followed by a faint "ding"... "two, three...four. " the voice chimed until reaching the tenth landing.. The movement slowed and stopped. "Tenth floor Mr. Deschain, all out and thank you for visiting, come again". This time the voice was different, deeper almost menacing in it's tone. He could feel the snicker behind that voice... and it made his knees weak. The doors began to open, the light poured in, bright white it hurt his eyes to look into it.. he could only stand there waiting for his vision to return to normal. He gripped the edges of the doors, steadying himself, bracing for whatever was hidden in the haze of that damned light. "Hey, hurry up", the words boomed in the mechanics ears... "he's coming around, look his eyes are moving" The sounds came from above him, but his eyes couldn't make out anything except the hazy gray shadows within the brilliance. He flinched and gripped the doors tighter, waiting for the unknown...

Comments (49)


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starfire777

6:24PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Excellent image and story!!!

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MagikUnicorn

6:30PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Nice job

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flavia49

6:41PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

splendid story and image

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nitegrafix

6:47PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Really, wow, freaking impressive, very nice work !

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SidheRoseGraphics

6:53PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

You really managed to capture the weird, surreal ambiance of where he seems to be in both image and words, Seth. This is outstanding and very well done!! You've gotten our attention with this ;)

KnightWolverine

7:21PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Talk about an out of body experience....Must agree Seth you got me curious and await the next installment...Damn good image above that helps telling the story and helps create a situation of bewilderment...(smiles)..

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eekdog

8:30PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

one heck of an imagination Seth, great story.. superb lighting and mystery to this image.. happy holidays..

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4udreamcatcher

8:47PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Great image! I really admire your versatility!

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bakapo

9:48PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

wow, what a chapter! well done writing and art!

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Faemike55

10:05PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

this scene gripped me hard! Great writing and cool image

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rbowen

10:31PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Very good story! Excellent work!

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bebopdlx

10:39PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Nice effects in this, cool story.

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daggerwilldo

11:20PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Somewhere between Heaven and Hell, awake and asleep places like this exist. This is a compelling and interesting render and an amazing written narrative. I do hope this story plays out here for us to read and see. Excellent work.

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Stratkat

11:22PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

Great job! Very mysterious for sure. Well done!

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JuliSonne

11:57PM | Fri, 14 December 2012

A very graphic language. I feel put into a nightmare. Klaustrobophie .... I wake up. I am relieved and at the same time depends on a feeling that I am jumping from the jaws of death. Image and words are very powerful. GREAT made​​!

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byteline

12:52AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Excellent story and picture. Your fantasies is great. Very well done, dear Seth.

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Jean_C

2:15AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Very beautiful scene, the eyes are worrying, superb staging and lighting,excellent image and story, Seth!

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Leije

2:59AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Fantastic story and strong image, the lighting is superb and the mood is weird and worrying ! Excellent, Seth !

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lyron

3:23AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Great image!!!!

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CosmicWorth

4:49AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Great artwork my friend

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ragouc

5:40AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Good light and scene.

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JaneEden

7:32AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Great render and such a talent for the written word, hugs Jane xx

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romangirl

9:47AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Love the words and scene!

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TheOwl68

9:57AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Very intense surreal storyline here, Seth, and a superb, creepy image to compliment your writing, top notch work!

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drifterlee

10:23AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Very cool scene and story, Seth!!

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vechtdalcollege

10:40AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Hallucination,then coming to reality,it's like awaking out of a bad dream. A great story with even a greater image! Gr.Rudy.

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mickeyrony

11:00AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Always the best from you my friend . You gave us magical moments in all kind of works . Thanks a lot for all ((5++))

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Ash888

11:30AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

The image suggests more than the text adding to the suspense. Nice one though, the setting and colors are so nice, but the gurney prooves that feeling wrong. very good.

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tigertim

11:37AM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Cool scene.. and cool words, very Outer Limits in tone!.. great reading!

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razabazarguy

1:58PM | Sat, 15 December 2012

Brilliant story...And extraordinary lighting effect in this render

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