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Writers Challenge posted on Jan 27, 2013
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The January challenge topic in the Writer's Gallery is "Best Friends." Thanks to Jeff for coming up with a monthly topic! This one was more difficult than you might think. There doesn't seem to be much to say when everything is going well. :) Best Friends August, 2008 You appeared one day Out of the wild blue yonder Interesting photography Cutie picture on your bio page With that fancy jet Aviator shades And I thought, "Too bad ... He looks a bit too military And seems to be interested Only in guy things." You know, Like you do No intention behind the thought ... just noticing December, 2008 You were more interesting Than I had originally guessed Conversation back and forth There was more to you than Airplanes Summer, 2009 A bunch of us are meeting in Chicago Would you like to join us? Plans were in place Major surgery Kept you at home We had a blast But you were missed December, 2009 So Do you have a headset? That first night we talked For over four hours You thought you'd never have Another thing to say January, 2010 Endless conversation Hours and hours Every evening The first time you flew out Was for a week Which became two Everyone loved you (Especially me) May, 2010 You'd met my family I'd met yours You packed up the car The dog Made it here in record time To start our new life together September, 2010 We knew we had to invite Everybody Or nobody So we chose nobody Two witnesses And a minister Just enough To make it legal January, 2013 Three years of Adventure Fun Laughter My life is so much better With you Than without you I wish I had words That didn't sound pat Pollyanna Geese with blue bows But you know And if nobody else understands It doesn't make a bit of difference Every day I get to spend another day With my best friend .......................... Cover art done in ArtRage and CS5. Font is AR Hermann

Comments (20)


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rainbows

1:59AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Beautiful writing, dear Tara. I am so glad you have a best friend and soul mate. Hugs. Di. xx

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wysiwig

2:29AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Ok, so who is it? {:-0 This is beautiful. Isn't it great when you can marry your best friend?

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durleybeachbum

7:37AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Perfect ! You are a clever (and very fortunate) woman, Tara!

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kgb224

7:48AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

I love the writing Tara. A wonderful and true story. My guess is who the two is in this story is you and Bill. God Bless.

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EJD64

8:51AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Very neat Tara. Yes, Bill is one of kind. The two of you complete the picture.

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kenmo

8:52AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Very nice...

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bmac62

8:57AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

How does one know If she's the right one What about obstacles Two thousand miles Family Politics Religion And a few more Listen with your ear Watch with your eye Touch with your hand Use your head Feel your heart Put it all in the balance And what do you find That same wonderful answer My life is so much better With you Than without you:*

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Faemike55

9:56AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Very beautiful writing and Bill's counter-point is perfect! Congrats to both of you

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hipps13

10:28AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

very sweet smiles with you as you have found a true best friend wonderful words, Tara May warm hugs with love, Linda Kaye

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helanker

10:37AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

SO absolutely wonderful and very touching too. I am very happy for your two, my friend. :-))))))))

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MrsRatbag

11:04AM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Beautiful!

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Isabelle711

12:42PM | Sun, 27 January 2013

This brought sweet tears to my eyes. :)))))) A special love like this can't be found just anywhere. :))))) This is truelly beautiful. :)))) Spoken from the heart. :))))) Thank you for sharing this most sweet moment. :)))) Carry A Warm Smile In Your Heart :))))

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RodS

5:57PM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Sometimes it's easy to believe in destiny..... What a wonderful piece, Tara! You and Bill were meant to be together. My congratulations to both of you! I'm looking forward to seeing you both this spring!

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npauling

6:27PM | Sun, 27 January 2013

A beautiful poem Tara and I'm so glad that you and Bill are still so happy. I love Bill's reply too. You are both made for each other and it was so great that RR brought you both together.

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ElusiveAngel

11:53PM | Sun, 27 January 2013

Very nice! I love the poetic side!

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Chipka

1:58AM | Mon, 28 January 2013

This is so excellent. It makes a nice Gwotian entu only it isn't on a leaf or a stone or a piece of found wood. Of course a traditional "declarative" sort of entu or groups of them would be written in a book with pages of rough, hand-made paper, but with a number of blank pages in the back, because, as everyone knows, entus are never finished. That's the point. And now, as I dip back into this world...which is a bit farther away from Gwot, I will say that this piece of work has triggered so many thoughts and feelings, and that's always a good thing. I love what's stated, and more, what's implied. Friends are like that, and to marry one is even better! Brilliant writing! I love it!

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moochagoo

12:12PM | Mon, 28 January 2013

A very special and great dedication.

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jendellas

12:40PM | Mon, 28 January 2013

Oh Tara, what a beautiful poem & Bills words in reply. You, Bill & Mandy were made to be together. xxx

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beachzz

12:29AM | Mon, 04 March 2013

Omg, how did I miss this? I remember all those steps; we talked about them and I remember one day you said, "no way can this work" and the next day you said, "yes, it can". and it has.....so very, very well!!!!!

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danapommet

7:33PM | Sun, 14 July 2013

I am just getting to read your poem 6 months late and needed to let you and Bill know how toughing both poems are. If life is good - you have done the right thing!


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