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If I Left the Circus

DAZ|Studio Atmosphere/Mood posted on Aug 12, 2013
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Zoom in for the best clarity! Every day brought sadness, so few ever brought pleasure That she woke or got out of bed, regret she could not measure To leave the circus, what others called life Was all she thought of, by day and by night Having become wary of life and continually giving She decided it best, to give up and cease living Not a reward in her job, or the love of a man Nor children she birthed to hold in her hands Youth fleeting, love unfounded, hope fleeting She stood in the pit angrily pleading That the dirt should fall in, encasing her there This life brought no joy, she could no longer bear The moonlight swept wide as morning grew near She woke with the sun and the birds singing could hear From the dirt she arose to a future still uncertain Yet for another day, there would be no final curtain Days drew along but gradually lightened One day she realized her outlook had brightened Then one day came love, and a partner for life A handsome young man that made her his wife Soon followed children, first two girls then one happy boy She found the career as mother she wanted, full of great joy She can never imagine all those days in her past She so desperately wanted each one to be last Sometimes things change for the better, sometimes they don't. Nobody knows where the next curve in the road leads, but will we ever know if we elect not to follow it? Sometimes hope springs eternal, sometimes it fades away to smouldering coals. The one thing to remember is that as long as there is something still smouldering, it can always come back to being a roaring fire. Have a wonderful evening.

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Faemike55

7:59PM | Mon, 12 August 2013

Very powerful image and poem/story. I think I stated it here before that when we look ahead in life there are so many choices; some good & some bad, BUT! when we look back we see a straight line from birth to now. You are so right in that we should give life a chance, each and every day. I say that if you can wake up, stand vertical (or near equivalent) breathe and (really my own words) not have a desire to eat brains, it's a great day to be alive. most outstanding work my dear friend. you bring out emotions and situations that a lot of people shy away from. Keep up the great work!!!!

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Palaemon

8:57PM | Mon, 12 August 2013

The image is beautiful, realistic and very well done. Excellent camera angle. Great idea to put the woman in a pit whose green color evokes mold. The poem is beautiful and I read it to the end, even though I knew very little English. But the first part seems very pessimistic and the second describes a dream of happiness that feminists condemn. It reminds me that in Germany they once called "three K": "Kinder, Küche, Kirche", "children, cooking, church." Great work anyway, interesting to look at and read!

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barryjeffer

10:06PM | Mon, 12 August 2013

Beautiful thoughts/words and a super image!

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illkirch

1:14AM | Tue, 13 August 2013

Very well done

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Cyve

7:38AM | Tue, 13 August 2013

Wonderfully done !

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Rock69

3:27PM | Tue, 13 August 2013

Great artwork ... both, the image and the poem ... or better: the combination!!! Hope is the last to die! This we should never forget!!! ;-)

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JaneEden

4:16PM | Wed, 14 August 2013

Powerful image and poetry, very well done! hugs Jane xx

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GrandmaT Online Now!

1:09PM | Sat, 17 August 2013

Excellent work!


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