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What I want

Writers Seasonal/Holiday posted on Jan 17, 2014
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Special Notes: I guess since the contest is over now it's okay to pull this over to my gallery. I want to thank everyone that voted for this piece, it won first place in the Holiday Contest, writers category, and that was very cool. Thanks everyone, and thanks to everyone that entered. Everyone wins when you share your talent and I loved all the stories that were entered. What I want. The house is strung with garland A wreath is on the door A candle in the window A tree sparkling with lights This is not what I want Outside with my friends Sleds down the hill Snowflakes on our tongues Sliding on the ice This is not what I want Hot Chocolate and Cookies Candy Canes and gingerbread Up the stairs they send me To wait and pretend This is not what I want At the table they sit Wrap this, wrap that Ribbons and tape This is not what I want Not what I want at all To my room I go Presents from Christmas past Broken under my bed Set my pen to paper And write the letter Honey, you can come down now Mom, I need an envelope I fold the letter And mark it, Santa, Urgent Above the fireplace I put it And off to bed I go My eyes open Did Santa get my letter? I will soon know Down the stairs I fly The tree is bare Not a light is strung Not a tinsel is hung Under the tree is empty This is what I want Dad holds the letter To them I run And hug them tight It is perfect This is what I want Dear Santa Ten Christmas’ I have known Qinisao, my pen pal, not one Give him my Christmas This is what I want Bobby

Comments (11)


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jendellas

5:13AM | Fri, 17 January 2014

WELL DONE, l can see why it won. X

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ontar1

7:07AM | Fri, 17 January 2014

Congrats on the win, it is a special work!

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GrandmaT

8:40AM | Fri, 17 January 2014

This is Magnificent! A well written and very thoughtful piece. I wholeheartedly agree with their choice of first place. Congratulations!!

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Windigo

8:53AM | Fri, 17 January 2014

I really did expect it to be winner of first place even though the other entries were remarkable and well done! What an amazing story of sharing! Congratulations!

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Roco43

4:36PM | Fri, 17 January 2014

Well done

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rickclark

6:21PM | Fri, 17 January 2014

Congratulations! Well written and thought provoking. Thanks. Rick

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Faemike55

8:08PM | Fri, 17 January 2014

Thought and tear provoking writing I can see why it won first place Congratulations

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auntietk

9:10PM | Fri, 17 January 2014

Well written. Congratulations! :)

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three_grrr

11:37PM | Sat, 18 January 2014

A wonderful, heartwarming story in poem form! Well done, and yes, I can see why it won, it certainly deserved it.

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mgtcs

7:34PM | Sun, 19 January 2014

Adorable poem my friend, marvelous work, congratulations on the win, you deserved without doubt!

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jocko500

10:14PM | Sun, 19 January 2014

wonderful stuff here


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