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Girls From T.N.A: Breitlenger Jar: Ch 5 P 21

Digital Comics Story/Sequential posted on Oct 10, 2015
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As G4, Arawen, and the rest of the gang haul Slickie away, the rest of the team is busy as well. There are alien mechs to bring back to the lab, leads to follow, and a few surprises. We rejoin Ranpha, Trish, Rico, and Sam as they head back to the lab... I have to apologize for my comments being so spotty, and late. Still a lot going on (and my vacation is almost over - bleah,,,). Jo and I are still fighting the creeping crud, but we're getting a little better each day. I'll try to get caught up tonight. I have to say, I'm really disappointed with this site lately - not getting the email ebots really sucks. I'm slowly getting used to it, but I really miss the emails - and the old Rendo. :-( Anyway, not a lot to ramble on about, so I'll just let you enjoy the story, and I'll have the next page up soon. Hope everyone is having a good weekend! Thanks for dropping by! ShuttleStar spaceship available at DAZ Melanie available at DAZ Sunset photos by me Ranpha, Trish, and Rico by Dan (Diemamker) Thanks for letting the Girls come over and play, buddy! Sam by Mrestey (Mike) Thanks to you also, bro!

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Comments (20)


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GrandmaT

7:45PM | Sat, 10 October 2015

This looks AWESOME! The computers must like the new layout. I hope they get Ranpha calmed down before she blows a gasket. I also hope you two get better soon.

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Richardphotos

8:39PM | Sat, 10 October 2015

very exciting scene and always so detailed

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Diemamker

8:48PM | Sat, 10 October 2015

AWESOME!!!!!!...... that expression on Ranpha's face in the last panel is just priceless!!!... I may have to use it some time!!... this issue with this Snowzem guy really has her in an up roar!! can't wait to see what happens next! I have to say this has to be one of your best pages yet!

I got see if I can make something close to the lair layout... the girls just may drop in... ( literally )... I hope you all get better, and that your time off was good, and I hope to see the next page soon... have a good one!!!

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calico_jester

8:59PM | Sat, 10 October 2015

"worm-ridden piece of filth" indeed !!! It's good to see such viral disparagement without resorting to vulgarity :)

Your new work station area seems to have a resemblance to this ShuttleStar spaceship interior.

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SidheRoseGraphics

9:46PM | Sat, 10 October 2015

Oh, oh...what's happened now? You're so good at leaving us in suspense!

Hope you and Jo feel better real soon, Rod!

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MagikUnicorn

9:56PM | Sat, 10 October 2015
GORGEOUS.jpg
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giulband

11:59PM | Sat, 10 October 2015

Excellent work !!!

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eekdog

12:58AM | Sun, 11 October 2015

just imagine dial up, Rod. i swear, it takes me sometimes over an hour to post a image here, over at the attic about 8 min with my dial up.. the scenes are so well thought out and amazing love the atmospheres with the sky and details on ships computer and operating lights.just truly amazes me on how you come up with the ideas for such a great ongoing series. looks like Ranpha needs a chill pill. hope you can relaxe soon also my friend, you and Jo..enjoy the rest of a always short weekend.

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T.Rex

6:09AM | Sun, 11 October 2015

SO much to see and say in this series of images I don't know where to start! Beautiful sunset. Love the interior of the ship's bridge. I admire your ability to vary the girls wardrobes. And you must have a whopping computer for all that clothing and all the figures to render so nicely. Looks like the work on your computer room has really started to pay off!

Is there anything a T.Rex can help the girls with concerning a worm-ridden piece of filth (see https://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/a-peeping-tom-7/2645689 ). Is the filth related to "Slickie" in any manner? Something nice to sink one's teeth into? Man, I'm glad to see you back in the swing of things! And, master of suspense! I CAN'T wait! Keep 'em comin'! :-)

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Cyve

8:36AM | Sun, 11 October 2015

It's an AWESOME work my friend... Fantastic scene and these characters are so fabullous... Outstanding composition also !!!

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Daddywolf

12:40PM | Sun, 11 October 2015

I know how tough it is to try to do what you really want to do (art) with all of life's hurtles,Site changes, sickness,Family, computer repairs,upgrades /replacements, Car repairs/replacements, Internet problems. I hope every thing will find a balance and Peace will guide the Planets! oh sorry I got carried away that's "The Age of Aquarius"

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auntietk

2:25PM | Sun, 11 October 2015

You sure know where to put a page break! LOL! I have a love-hate relationship with this series. I look forward to a new page, but as soon as you post it and I've read it, it's over, and I have to wait again! It's pretty diabolical, actually. :P Good stuff! :)

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vitachick

2:46PM | Sun, 11 October 2015

Another awesome scene..They just keep getting better, if that is possible.. Hope you and Jo are all better real soon.

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synthetik3

4:04PM | Sun, 11 October 2015

man worse than watching tv lol Im ready for next episode lol

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adorety

7:25PM | Sun, 11 October 2015

Awesome and informative page. I confess I don't remember the history of Ranpha and that other character. Maybe you can send me a link to something explanatory. Funny reference to Dan's side story. Superb work and attention to detail, every item has its place.

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bugsnouveau

7:47PM | Sun, 11 October 2015

Great job, very enjoyable stuff

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Savage_dragon

7:56AM | Mon, 12 October 2015

Oh, I hate creeping crud! Feel better soon. And great job! ")

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UteBigSmile Online Now!

8:57AM | Mon, 12 October 2015

Fantastic looking scenes dear Rod, just love thEm all & thank your for the big SMILE!

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anahata.c

9:13AM | Thu, 29 October 2015

while I've seen a number of your 3D pieces, I've only read some sections of your ongoing comic strip. Which means that I'm coming in, in the middle of things. I should go back to the beginning, maybe I will. But ok, so right now I'll be commenting on the feel, visuals, and the sense of suspense, etc, from one snippet.

First, each frame is packed with visuals---esp inside the ship---and yet they feel complete and inviting. I think that comes from having flown---you know the intimate comfort of these spaces. Because the outsider looks in and feels "cloistered!" But you feel at home and relaxed, and it shows. Second, you let the equipment give space between the characters---1st and 3d frame---which anchors these crammed snapshots, gives them space. And the boards and all their windows are beautiful, visually. Wonderful details. For example, in frame 2, you have two photo-enhancements, which look like graphic representations...either that or they're shots of a blueprint in a desert. While other windows show lots of visualized data, wonderful colors, numerical readings, and a tele-conference. I assume angling visuals and print is a tedious task, I don't know if it's all done with one press of a button. Looks like painstaking work. Yet, you've definitely retained the poetry of technology! Third, each character is securely ensconced in their own world---one feels that in these cockpit frames. So that, as we look across the frames, we see there are separate 'universes' in each character's cubby hole. I'm saying this because it's not easy to do that. (I've done some traditional cartooning, and I've never mastered frames or strips. And I was working solely with pen and ink.)

Also, the captions have a good readable font, they're positioned without interfering with the visuals, and you made them semi transparent, which makes them even less of an intrusion. I don't know much about digital comics, but these seem to be fine choices.

That cockpit is beautiful in your hands. It really is. And I can see you know about cockpits. The detail is scintillating, I'd love to go in there and explore. Your trim---the blue lines around the chairs, etc---is luminous, setting the objects off from the darkness of the room. The same is accomplished by all the lights. (Otherwise, a cockpit could be a very dark place, illustration-wise.) And finally, the room in the last 2 frames is filled with fascinating detail, incl a contemporary printer, lots of fascinating monitor visuals, a pic that I swear is Betty Boop on a motorcycle, and fine angles on tables, floor lines, celling lines, etc. (Don't worry, I won't go into all this detail from now on---this is my first foray into studying this ongoing strip. And I'm struck by all the attention to detail. I look at this and think: Ok, this took 6 months. And it's just one installment. I'm reeeealllly glad I'm not the one making these...)

As for the story---well, I came in, in the middle of the 3d act, so I can't say too much about the particulars. But I know, right off, that they're confronting a menace, and they're gonna be figuring out how to deal with it in the future. I feel a story unfolding, and tension, and the promise of something to come. That means your storytelling is sharp and immediate. (And btw, I love that 3 piece desk in the last two frames. Tell me where I can get one. Maybe those ladies'll sell me theirs.) Lots of fine attention to details in clothing and hair, etc. And fine lighting. Which brings me to: If everyone of these models have to be posed individually, and lighted, etc etc, it must take forever. I don't do 3D, but I assume this would be a huge task. For example, as you I'm sure know, earlier animation cartoonists did full frame animation; but after a while they used templates that they placed into the frames, to save gobs of time and effort. (I think Miyazaki---whose work I adore---does lots of full frame work, more than not, and I know there are others.) I wonder if each of your frames is done character by character, lighting by lighting, etc. It seems huge. In any case, the lighting is dramatic, and the clarity of each person is sharp. Terrific work, Rod. I'll come back for earlier installments soon. Kudos for such a huge and scintillating project.

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Faemike55

4:18PM | Sun, 01 November 2015

Fabulous page Rod! seems that Ranpha is set to eviscerate this creep. I've got some great knives to lend her for the task. hope you both get better


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