Hatta Mari vs Moon Wolf - pg 4, UPDATED by mmitchell_houston

Poser • Comics/Cartoons • posted on Oct 23, 2016

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I think this is the final version of this page. The printed page size is 5.5 x 8.5, and this page will bleed to the edges. Taking advice from a few kind folks (thank you leroysquab), I split the text in panel three into two balloons, and added a little - sniff - sound effect. This was actually a bit of fun. In Manga Studio 5, I created the text layer, transferred it to a raster layer and then used the MESH TRANSFORM tool to give it that little slant and curve. This is a lot like the DISTORT tool in Photoshop, but I think this one may be a little better. If you compare this to the previous version, you'll also see I added a little texture to the ground in panel two. I went back and forth on this (I kind of liked the clean lines of the first version), but finally decided a little detail made it look more organic and match the larger panel. UPDATE: DANG. I had uploaded this a few minutes ago, but saw an error in the text rescaling. I've fixed it and replaced the image.

Comments (5)

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jif3d

7:11PM | Sun, 23 October 2016

The added floor detail and 'sound' effect round the scene off nicely and give a more polished look.

~Cheers~

mmitchell_houston

11:50PM | Sun, 23 October 2016

Thanks for noticing those details. For me, the big improvement was giving the text a little more breathing room in panel 3. That also gave me the room for the sound effect.

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