Shimmering Mage: Part 1 prologue 4 - yes it's long by RedPhantom

Writers • Fantasy • posted on Mar 26, 2017

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Kith returns to Sen-gan to find his vial and to help bring their friends home.

Comments (7)

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giulband

1:42PM | Sun, 26 March 2017

Good work !!

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ZigZag321

1:45PM | Sun, 26 March 2017

LOL. You're too funny putting "yes it's long" in the title.

Bonding certainly takes commitment up another level, that's for sure. Makes me think this world would be much better off if humans were as faithful and loyal as the dragons I've met through your story.

Really enjoyed Rejenn's speculation too. Plausible theory with the twins explanation, but I think this bears out Occam's razor.

And marvelous work with this scene! Fantastic camera and detail with smoke even coming out of the chimney.

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ikke.evc

3:56PM | Sun, 26 March 2017

Great scene and story. RP

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RedPhantom

6:38PM | Sun, 26 March 2017

Thanks, all.

This is the last part of the prolog. It's longer than any of the chapters in the book. I've come to the conclusion I can't write short stories. I don't know how to be brief.

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