Shimmering Mage: Part 5 A Job Offer by RedPhantom

Writers • Fantasy • posted on Mar 29, 2017

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Description

Several months later Rejenn approaches Sapphire with a job offer to sneak into the palace to return something the son of a visiting noble accidentally took. Because they were short on money, Shimmer agrees to help her saying she could get her into the palace. Kith tells them to ask to speak to King Emeton's advisor if they're caught.

Comments (6)

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ZigZag321

11:19AM | Wed, 29 March 2017

Uh oh. Here we go again. Hope this goes smoothly. So much can go wrong on these jobs. But at least Ann is the perfect sidekick to get her in and out of the palace safely, hopefully. Very cool detail on the magic vials too. Definitely piqued my curiosity.

I found it really interesting how you used the name "AnnLonna" more at the beginning of this installment. I think that's the most I've seen you use her proper name since I can't even remember when. Conscious decision for a future purpose? Very intriguing. Very cool.

Totally excellent work with this scene too, Phantom. Very beautiful subtle lighting and I love Ann's concentration face! She looks so focused. That's so great. So perfect. You get the feeling she wants to pull the words right out of his mind.

Super fun chalkboard work too!

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bucyjoe

8:04PM | Wed, 29 March 2017

cool

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RedPhantom

9:38PM | Wed, 29 March 2017

Thanks

Yes, there's a reason for me calling Ann by for real name. You'll find out why next time. I debated on switching and when and how but I decided to do it early on.

I blame Vor for the chalkboard. He keeps changing it. I told him to leave my name off it. Doesn't listen to me any more than he listens to Kritalla.

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