Shimmering mage: part 8 Before the King by RedPhantom

Writers • Fantasy • posted on Apr 07, 2017

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The guard takes them before King Emeton. Sapphire learns that Shimmer is really the runaway princess, Annlonna. Ann explains they weren't stealing but trying to return the statue. King Emeton has them taken up to Ann's room while he sorts out the situation and decides what to do.

Comments (8)

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giulband

8:14AM | Fri, 07 April 2017

Excellent composition of the scene and POV !!

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ikke.evc

10:33AM | Fri, 07 April 2017

All those troubles for a toy. Nice one RP.

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RedPhantom

10:41AM | Fri, 07 April 2017

Thanks guys

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ZigZag321

11:33AM | Fri, 07 April 2017

Ho ho ho ho ho. I have always wanted to smack the taste right out of Emeton's mouth. LOL. I can't help it! Something about him.

All that aside, I'm mad at him for not being happy that Ann is okay after all this time. This is no criticism of you! Great writing and personality revelation! This is the way he is. This is the way he would react. Very, very well done!

But it's like, come on, Emeton. Be happy she's okay! So what? She tried to steal a statue. (Or so he believes.) Big deal. She could be starving for all he knows. Grumble, grumble, grumble. You always make me want to add a personal anecdote.

Great work here, Phantom!!!!!! The scene itself is fantastic. What a marvelous reflection on the platform and totally awesome camera work! Love this shot!!!

You're really nailing this. This is what we've been waiting for and you are delivering big time.

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