Shimmering Mage: Part 6 The Heist by RedPhantom

Writers • Fantasy • posted on Apr 01, 2017

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Description

Shimmer and Sapphire switch the real statue for the fake. Two of the princes passing through the room delay their escape so they're caught by the guard.

Comments (8)

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ZigZag321

10:21AM | Sat, 01 April 2017

Oh crap. I was concerned that no good would come of this. Excellent work with this scene, Phantom. The passage, Ann's cloak, and especially the reflection on the statue in front of them really grabbed me. Gorgeous light through the windows too!

I think you did a really effective job with the stuttering. And I don't think it's overdone either.

I also like that you identified it as stuttering. As I was reading, I found it interesting that you used Janta to get the point across instead of saying .... "Quote", Bacna stuttered. I think it was even more effective this way. And yup. Yeah. This is something you wouldn't want to overdo, in my opinion.

Very well done!

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giulband

11:24AM | Sat, 01 April 2017

Very very beautiful image, absolutely well done and composed !!

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ikke.evc

11:41AM | Sat, 01 April 2017

Very nice render, the stutter is not un readble. I agree with ZZ. Well done RP.

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bucyjoe

4:31PM | Sat, 01 April 2017

well done

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RedPhantom Online Now!

7:21PM | Sat, 01 April 2017

Thanks, guys. I'll try to watch Bacna's stuttering and make sure I don't overdo it.

I'm beginning to hate that cloak. It's a pain to drape right. From now on, cloaks will only be worn if mentioned in the text. The room was a pain too but I don't have to re-create it for other scenes.

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