Three days earlier…
The four year old peaked out through the opening in the leather stretched tent. Smoke filled the clearing and stung at her eyes. She pulled the opening closed and shrank back into the darkness of the tent, trying to decide what to do. Smoke wasn’t normal, was it? She thought to her pre-school class and the drills the teacher had made them do if the classroom filled with smoke.
She grabbed a shirt and put it over her mouth and nose. She was already as low to the ground as she could get. She was sitting on the ground. What was next? She had gotten a gold star in class for knowing the answer. She remembered and looked at the sleeping form of her father. Tell an adult, that’s what you did next. She pushed at her father’s shoulder.
“Papa, wake up, papa, there’s smoke.”
Grethu’s eyes fluttered open. “Hmm… what is it, sweetheart, do you have to go potty?”
“Papa, there’s smoke.”
Grethu pushed the sleep from his mind and sniffed at the air. There was smoke. He raised a hand to the side of the tent, and heat, along with a red glow coming through the seams of the tent. Grethu sat up, alarmed now. He looked at his daughter. She had a shirt pushed against her face. He grabbed their drinking flask and took the shirt from the little girl. He poured water on the shirt, then tied it around her head.
“Lana, keep that around your face.”
The little girl nodded. He grabbed another shirt, and after soaking it, tied it around his own head. He could hear the fire now, burning the nearby brush. This campsite was at the furthest end of the cluster of campsites. He wasn’t a wealthy man by any means and had only been able to afford to rent a campsite at the less cleared end of the popular campground, but it had afforded them more privacy as there were no other campers down here.
Grethu carefully looked outside. He could see flames uncomfortably close to their camp. The forest was on fire. He turned back to his daughter.
“Sweetheart, I’m going to carry you inside my coat. Stay inside the coat, don’t look out. Do you understand?” The girl was frightened now and only stared at him. “It’s going to be alright, just keep your head inside my coat.”
He opened the tent and was immediately struck by the overwhelming thick smoke stinging at his eyes. The trees to his left and right were engulfed in flames, and the grass was on fire just beyond the tent. He crawled outside, then reached back in and pulled his daughter out. The little girl had started to cry. He pushed her under his coat and she buried her face into his chest.
Grethu stood and searched for a direction to go. He looked back at the tent. The rental camping gear was a month’s wages. It would take a long time to pay it off if he lost the gear. His other financial obligations were already stretched to their limit, and the reason his wife had left him, she had grown tired of living hand to mouth. It wasn’t his fault, a dock hand didn’t make much, and it was all he knew how to do. The woman hadn’t even said goodbye to Lana.
A falling tree just behind the tent made his mind up for him. He turned and ran through the thick smoke, his arms clutched around his daughter. Yes, it was the right decision. His daughter was all that mattered. He had saved for two years to be able to bring her here and camp as their Ruk ancestors lived. If the situation hadn’t been so serious, he would have laughed. Maybe he was getting his money’s worth on this trip after all. Certainly life couldn’t have been easy for his ancient ancestors, always on the run from predators and natural disasters. Well, he was getting a good taste of what life had been like back then.
He looked down at the ground. There was a path at the far end of the clearing that would lead them out of the forest, but he hadn’t seen the path yet. Had he run too far, or not far enough? He stopped and turned in a circle. Nothing was familiar. He’d missed the path. Which way was the right way? The fire was all around them now, and the smoke too thick to see more than a few feet. He was lost.
Grethu stroked his daughters head. What would he do when the flames came for them? Could he let his daughter die like that? The very first brush of the final decision he’d have to make entered his mind. Could he do it? He pushed the thought aside and kept walking.
A tree fell in front of him and he had to change directions. The heat of the fire was nearly unbearable and he struggled to breathe. He still hadn’t found the path. It was hopeless. They were trapped. Tears started to flow down his face. It was nearly time to make the decision. He couldn’t let Lana burn to death.
Grethu ran. The fire roared through the tree tops. He felt dizzy, he wouldn’t be able to run much further. The heat was now a painful thing he couldn’t escape. He felt it burning his flesh.
He stroked the girl’s head. His life had been one bad decision after the next. “I’m sorry, sweetheart.” His hand tightened on her head. “I’ll be with you soon, I promise.”
A sound so strange and completely out of place came to him through the smoke. He paused and listened.
Ping… Ping… Ping… Ping…
“A locator beacon?” The sound brought him back to reality and he looked down at his daughter. He snatched his hand away from her head. What had he been about to do? The revulsion of it nearly made him throw up.
Ping… Ping… Ping… Ping…
Grethu followed the sound through the smoke and nearly fell over the small tent. He looked down, the tent was so small it must have been a child’s tent. Of course, he’d seen some parents allow their children to sleep several yards from their main campsite, to give them a sense of independence. The locator beacon was coming from inside the tent.
He pushed the flap open and looked inside. The air inside was still relatively fresh and he stuck his head through the opening to take a deep breath. He pulled his coat open and gently turned his daughter to also take a breath.
Ping… Ping… Ping… Ping…
Grethu looked down at the source of the sound. A stuffed bear lying on a small sleeping bag was the source. He reached down and picked the toy up, and immediately heard a voice in his head.
“I am Mr. Buckles, Advanced Deep Learning A.I., my master has already fled the fire. I am now in survival mode. I saw you on my proximity scanner. My scanner indicates you are suffering from smoke inhalation and disorientation. I estimate you have eight minutes before you and the child you are holding succumbs to the smoke and die. Hold me up so that I can scan the area and find an escape route.”
Grethu stared wide-eyed at the small stuffed toy. A survival A.I., the child that owned this device must have the wealthiest of parents. Grethu backed out of the tent and held the stuffed bear into the air. A green light scanned a 360 degree circle.
“I have determined an escape route. Turn to your right and walk straight. Do not run yet, you will use up too much oxygen.”
Grethu did as the stuffed bear ordered. It was a direction he wouldn’t have picked, but this was his only hope to get out of the forest. He followed the bear’s instructions and walked. The bear had him do several frightening switchbacks that looked like he was leading them into the flames.
The burning pain from the heat ended. He felt nothing. Grethu glanced at the bear, he’d heard that the Survival A.I.’s fighter pilots carried could block the pilot’s ability to feel pain, so they wouldn’t have to experience a particularly horrible death. His burns must be worse than he knew for the A.I. to have done it to him.
The fire reared up all around them, Grethu couldn’t see any way out, but he continued to follow the bears lead. They reached a spot in the flames with an opening no more than twenty feet across. It was a tunnel through the fire.
“You must now run,” said Mr. Buckles. “You have 12.7 seconds before the fire closes this escape path.”
Grethu took off at a sprint, covering the distance between the flames barely in time. He looked back and saw the flames close the path he’d just run through.
“You must now run one-half mile straight ahead. There is a road. A vehicle is coming. You have one minute ten seconds or you will miss the vehicle.”
The distance and time was doable for a Ruk, but Grethu was coughing from the smoke. It would be a hard run, especially with his daughter in his arms. He ran. The vehicle was a truck, and passed as he was still thirty feet from the road. He ran out onto the road and chased after the truck, waving his arm and struggling to shout.
“Please…stop…” Grethu shouted between a hacking cough.
The brake lights on the truck lit up. It stopped and a teenage boy jumped out. “Holy Great Tree, where did you come from, Mister.”
Grethu bent over and pointed at the burning forest.
“You came through that?” the boy asked incredulously, then saw Lana. “Oh my gosh, you have a little girl. Come on, get in the truck, this road isn’t going to be here much longer.”
Grethu carried his daughter to the truck and lifted her inside. Her eyes were glazed over and she didn’t respond when he said her name. Fear gripped his chest as he gently nudged her. “Lana! Lana!”
Lana blinked and looked up at her father and smiled. “Mr. Buckles was telling me a story about a turtle and a fox that had to cross a river.”
Grethu stared at the bear. Of course, survival A.I.’s had a V.R. mode. From the time they had left the tent where he’d found the bear, she had been inside the V.R. and hadn’t experienced any of the terror of their run through the fire. Grethu looked into the bear’s eyes. “Thank you, Mr. Buckles, thank you.”
Comments (11)
STEVIEUKWONDER
This really does pop for all the right reasons. If anything, it's historically sound and a real view for the observer. I admire all your work and in particular, this is really notable!
UteBigSmile
I agree with Stevie and your related image looks like a fantastic cover!
VDH
Awesome render ,impressive pose !!
Radar_rad-dude
Oh my! This is just too precious for words!!!!
jendellas
AWE, just loved it. Love image too.
miwi
I agree with all above!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5*
eekdog
absolutely a dynamite job.
JoeJarrah
whets the appetite nicely for a reunion with Luca at some point... great cover
donnena
Hooray!!! Mr Buckles lives!!!
RodS
Man... This had me close to tears.... THAT is writing and storytelling.... YAAAY! Mr. Buckles made it! and saved two others... I need one of those....
anahata.c
2 things (before I start)...I've just read chptrs 27 through 30 (thru Teddy's Odyssey): I'm commenting on 29 so I don't take up all the space on an upload people are still commenting on (I don't wanna look like a pig!) But I did read through 30!
Second: I see you just posted 31! (You sneak!) Well, let me comment thru 30, and I'll get to 31 soon. (And hey---forgive me for not reading everything before 27---it took me close to an hour to read 27 thru 30: I'm slow! But I'll do my best to read the rest over time. I just wanted to dive in tonight...)
Coming in in 27, I see a tidal wave of storytelling. (I last left at the train-classroom---how you ever got to that conflagration I have no idea!) You have always handled catastrophic events with real pacing and power---I was gripped through the whole fire, the way the various characters came close to death, that amazing 'exodus-like' wall of water (ie, moses parting the red sea, which you gotta figure has some walls of water in it), the way jack deflected lightning to save others---again, the theme of the older protecting then younger, even when the older is young themselves...you have a lot of fatherly protection in your tales, and you gotta know how touching that is---even when there's tension between the saver and savee. (That's maybe the 3d time I've ever written "savee", and I'm already ashamed.)
And your little packed details like the sun seed which you can only eat one of, because of its potency: You're really good at these. And, they're often added with deft hand, so they're big without stating that they're big.
Then the girl comes in (lana), w/ those heart-pounding descriptions of the fire encroaching and the sense of doom, and then the sudden escape---w/ the help of Mr. B. (Remember, I came in having last left you at the train-class, so I don't know much about the bear's history; but I love how he's wound up being this amazing power---it makes his funeral really powerful. And, re the fire and the father holding his daughter for dear life is, again, more catastrophe; and you always make these passages very immersive...I could see from the comments that others felt that too. (Big cheer.)
The section with the father and daughter was terrifying and touching, esp when he considered taking her life out of sheer mercy---and then didn't have to, and then went through all that guilt. Wrenching passage.
Then the bear intercedes to show the father the way out---boy did I not expect that---and, in your usual way, you put all kinds of obstacles in the father and daughter's way, so their escape is by the skin of their teeth. I'm impressed at how you maintain pacing when you're putting one tension-packed episode after the next. Also, I see the archetype of 'journey through life and death' (the hero's/heroine's journey) to get to a promised destination. I mean, that's about as ancient as humanity, and I always love when you evoke it.
Which brings us to the story of the bear: I really like how you save this section for that chapter, rather than weave it into the previous chapters. (Well! I haven't read about 20 chapters, so if you DID write it before, I missed it.) And see, even Mr B has to go through a trial-by-conflict, until he finds a lab assistant who looks like he's gonna be the savior: And you trick us again, you little sneak, by making the lab assistant almost do-the-bear-in. (Well done, sir.) And then the journey through the mail chute and "postal system", which is a lot of fun, even thought it's packed with real peril.
Loved the encounters in the package areas, including someone giving the bear red eyes---I was expecting those eyes to be due to his powers!
And then, with tension and buildup, he reaches to Luca. Yet even there you throw in wrenches---with Tan and Jack fearing that this 'bear' is some kind of dybbuk, a macabre trickster, or some other horrid mutation (caused by coming back from the dead), when in fact it's really Mr B. You always infuse new tensions, and they always feel natural to me. But Luca wins out, and the bear is the bear. (I like how they insist L cleans the bear in the kitchen sink, where they can keep an eye on him. Fine touch.)
The funeral for the bear was very sad: I didn't read the prev chapters, but I could see that his demise was a tearing loss, and very sad. And I NEVER thought you'd resurrect his character (ie, we'd find out he's still alive). But, given the twists and turns you put into these things, now no one knows what you'll do next, which keeps the tension and adventure constant. For the time being however, this ends with great relief: So many characters go through the 'ring of fire' yet you keep the redemptions coming. Powerful gripping stuff, as always wolf; and the end of ch. 30 was very uplifting. (But don't worry, I won't expect that to last: The storyteller has new revelations up his sleeve...) Beautifully done!