Blue Boundary Part Two by Graeme_McAllister
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This is part two of a Two Part Poetry Art and Poetry Piece. Part One - https://www.renderosity.com/rr/mod/gallery/?image_id=3045601
Blue Boundary
Colours call beyond the border,
Chaotic in their playful passions.
Blue boundaries line the corridor,
Limiting lines of reason
Enforcing mathematical steps
Upon my electric ideas.
Structure, syntax, sentences
Steal energy from my pleas
But isn’t it the drummer’s discipline
That guides the dancers?
Blue Boundary, the lapis line
Shapes our sparks to sculptures.
Comments (2)
anahata.c
while you weave the question (unspoken as well as spoken) of the lines and vibrations and strictures that 'enforce mathematical stepes upon my electric ideas', you create a world of connections in your sounds, your alliterations, consonances, etc, which feel like freeing music and transcendence. Your conclusion brings the structures together with the inner electricity into one unifying spirit. Very musical language and rhythms (lots of 3 beat lines which feel like little lights, and your sound rhyme is very inviting), and a wonderful conclusion. As for your images, your first image shows a meditating soul with structures/ lights emanating from him (or her?) from the heart chakra into the kinds of borders and structures found in ancient mandalas, with rich saturated colors. The second image (above) is a word construction, unified by a color scheme (black/blue/green) and moving inwardly, and then out into the world again (top to bottom). I really like your link between your poems and your art. Very musical work.
Graeme_McAllister
I'm just speechless right now and feeling quite emotional. That is simply one of the most encouraging comments I've ever received about my work. THANK YOU so much. More than I can say.