4-8-4 by Cinema1954
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Well, here's the final image (or nearly so). Any critiques or suggestions would be appreciated.
Comments (11)
Curious
yo looks really good, the smoke on top looks a lil funny...dont know y, but i dont know how to make batter smoke...so...yea lol, nice job =D
rubber-chicken
Like it, I agree about the smoke, just try making it inphotoshop think you get a better result with more control, would love to see one in a night time situation with lights on the train and in the cabins, a moon in the background, maybe a few people on the bridge. good stuff, love the train model :)
cartesius
Really good scene but it's too clean -- try dirtying the textures up a bit (between the tracks, the platform, the locomotive itself and so on). The smoke could do with a bit of tweaking as well, it almost looks as a solid object as it is now. Have you tried pupi's technique with SweepNURBS and displacement?
YL
That's a fantastic work ! Suggestion ? I would like to see some little stones between the rails : maybe it's too flat in this region
memaci
Nearly flawless image. I like the broken yellow and white stripes along the train platform, great attention to detail overall. The smoke does need some work though.
miketche
Great image. Love the detail on the train. But like said above, the smoke needs works and the ground between the trains needs dirtying up.
DeZ
Absolutely fantastic! Now when I have seen it textured, I would love to see a black and white closeup rendering as seen on old photo's =)
celestine_babayaro
This is one of those images that could go all the way. Like many others, I'd give my eye-teeth, once I knew what and where they were, to be able to do something like this. You must be thinking, 'too clean? with all the dirt I put in there??' But over-clean is the first impression I got too. Maybe more fog or environmental effects, a la our resident Spanish genius Carles Piles, especially in a place with a lot of soot flying around. There seems to be some fog already, but it's not the only train at St. Pancras. But, you know, F*^#in' Wow!
linkinpark
Fantastic modeling work,Im impressed...I agree with cartesius,it wants to be dirtier!!!Like it very much..
Cinema1954
Thanks, all... I've posted an update here: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=310003&Start=1&Sectionid=19&WhatsNew=Yes
sabaman
great modeling and nice render, smokes a bit odd at the top but still nice render,...